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As at the close of day the trials and care
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being a dissyllable. We prefer your prose sketch, which is pathetic, yet we think
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Granny was a little selfish in preventing her son from being a sailor. With practice and study you might possibly write stories that would be
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One defect in
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Granny's Hero is the mode of beginning the story--a sort of double introduction.
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We were talking of heroes (not heros) to-night, and again,
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We were sitting in the gloaming one dull winter's evening.
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as the saying is, by rushing immediately into violent emotions into which you cannot carry your readers with you, because you have not shown any cause, or prepared them for such a climax. You evidently have a keen eye for natural beauty, but you need to curb the exuberance of your descriptions.
human
Old Sol is not a satisfactory expression. Read all the good prose and poetry you can, and try to
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Donald's Away to another magazine, if you have not sold the copyright; but you would be obliged to tell the editor it had already appeared elsewhere, and this would prove a drawback.
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Long ago, and the two verses you enclose, are very creditable work, and it is possible, of course, that you might receive remuneration for them; but it is very difficult thus to dispose of