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My very first Wizzley: What is Fair Trade--and Why should we care?

 
graceonline
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on 08/21/2011

Since it is my very first, I would appreciate any and every criticism. I am sure I have much too learn about Wizzley.

I'm especially curious whether there is a way to reduce white space between modules. Near the end of the page, I introduced a list with one module, then split the list into two side-by-side modules to avoid having one long, boring list full of white space. I added a grey spacer module between them to break up the white space, but that did not really solve the problem. Suggestions welcome!

chefkeem
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on 08/21/2011

You've written a very fine article, Kathryn, and I actually like the way it looks.  Smile


Achim "Chef Keem" Thiemermann is the co-founder of a pretty cool new platform called...um...er...oh, yeah - Wizzley.com.
graceonline
Posts: 52
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on 08/22/2011

Thank you so much, chefkeem. You made my day!

mandeesears
Posts: 120
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on 08/22/2011

Hi Grace! Very nice article, btw.

The white space doesn't bother me at all. Some extra white space can actually make sure a reader isn't overwhelmed by sheer information. Too much content can be very hard to digest. Breaking it up with white space gives the perception that the article can be easily read and understood.

Good luck and welcome to Wizzley! 


Lovin' Wizzley! Come see my newest Wizz at Patio Decorating Ideas | Color Schemes.
graceonline
Posts: 52
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on 08/23/2011

Thank you for taking a look and for your advice. I appreciate your time as well as your expertise.

Ralpapajan
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on 08/24/2011

Mmm.  You are obviously an accomplished writer and know your way around.  This is great.  Good luck to you ~ I am green with envy. If you'll pardon the pun.


I really do love this Wizzley Forum and the whole thing. I am learning something new here every time I visit.
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