I would like feedback on my new hub

  1. Shubhankar Sharma profile image61
    Shubhankar Sharmaposted 7 weeks ago

    Hello Hubbers,
    I'd like valuable feedback on my hub
    https://hubpages.com/literature/surrender1

  2. Rupert Taylor profile image95
    Rupert Taylorposted 7 weeks ago

    I am not qualified to comment on poetry, but one big problem is your first image, which is watermarked. That means you don't have permission to use it. I suspect your second image may infringe copyright rules as well.

    There's help here

    https://hubpageshelp.com/content/Learni … -image-use

    1. Shubhankar Sharma profile image61
      Shubhankar Sharmaposted 7 weeks ago in reply to this

      Thanks for pointing my mistake ,I am gonna change that violated image .

 
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