I'd like feedback on my Hub: Top 10 great changes made by Arabic scientists in t

  1. Mohamed Zain profile image71
    Mohamed Zainposted 2 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Top 10 great changes made by Arabic scientists in the world. (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. theraggededge profile image95
      theraggededgeposted 2 months ago in reply to this

      Hi there,

      There are numerous issues with your article:

      Your English is not of the required standard.
      There is no introduction.
      You have too many links.
      Your images are not sourced correctly and may be used illegally.

      One question: what does Tarzan have to do with science?

      Sorry to be so negative, you've obviously put a great deal of effort into your article. However, you need to learn how to format and write an article before you attempt to publish here. Try the Learning Center https://hubpageshelp.com

 
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