I'd like feedback on my Hub: A birthday party fit for a unicorn......

  1. ksemert profile image60
    ksemertposted 5 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub A birthday party fit for a unicorn...... (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. Jason mackenzie profile image88
      Jason mackenzieposted 5 months ago in reply to this

      Hi, is there a particular reason for using italics for the body of content? And towards the end it is regular again. In my opinion maintaining uniformity throughout - as in italics/regular - would improve readability.

      Another suggestion would be to put the 3 cake pics in a single row using photoshop rather one below the other. This would bridge the huge gap between content and ensure continuity while reading. Hope I have been helpful, thanks, regards...

  2. Rupert Taylor profile image96
    Rupert Taylorposted 5 months ago

    Couple of quick observations based on a brief scan.

    Your headline needs to be in Title Case and without the numerous dots.

    Italic is only used for emphasis, not for body text.

    Images have to be credited to source and must be free of copyright restrictions.

    You should read the Learning Center here https://hubpageshelp.com/

 
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