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Review:velajune says:
Hello!

Oh, what a fun read. It was funny all throughout and a much-needed break from the scary stories I've been reading tonight.

The use of repetition was well used. I'm thoroughly amused, with Teddy and Victoire's relationship. I loved that it was about one of my favorite pairings in the HP-verse. And you weren't kidding about the fluff!

Their children in this story are also interesting. I'm curious and will probably check out your other stories that may feature them. In particular, I was most interested in Remus, not for his namesake, but for the line, "Remus said in that drawn-out not-quite-a-whine he had perfected since turning twelve, pulling a long-suffering face."

Overall, I enjoyed your writing!
June

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