Comments for WriteNow http://writenowbooks.org Online publishing community for schools Mon, 29 Feb 2016 09:34:27 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=4.8 Comment on Discover the real Monaco by Aaron Delanea http://writenowbooks.org/?book=discover-the-real-monaco#comment-977 Mon, 29 Feb 2016 09:34:27 +0000 http://writenowbooks.org/?post_type=book&p=4206#comment-977 I like the layout of your book, how you sorted out the reviews and the features. I also think you used some nice vocabulary and described the places well. I’m sure your book convinced a lot of people to go to Monaco. Only next time, some of your natural features where constructed by humans, so that is something to remember if you make another book.

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Comment on Russia by Aaron Delanea http://writenowbooks.org/?book=russia#comment-976 Mon, 29 Feb 2016 09:24:10 +0000 http://writenowbooks.org/?post_type=book&p=4211#comment-976 I really liked how you used different words and how you had clear information. You had a lot of sources and it shows that you have visited lots of different websites to double check your information. I also like how you had a balance between images and text!

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Comment on Welcome to the Winter Paradise FINLAND by Aaron Delanea http://writenowbooks.org/?book=welcome-to-the-winter-paradise-finland#comment-975 Mon, 29 Feb 2016 09:23:45 +0000 http://writenowbooks.org/?post_type=book&p=4212#comment-975 Mikael, you forgot your works cited page.

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Comment on Welcome to Austria by Maxine http://writenowbooks.org/?book=welcome-to-austria#comment-974 Mon, 29 Feb 2016 09:11:59 +0000 http://writenowbooks.org/?post_type=book&p=4270#comment-974 Your ibook was really nice i really want to go to Austria now!
i like how you added picture galleries but some thing to improve is the empty space you have in some places maybe add more pictures to it.

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Comment on Welcome to Luxembourg by Mikael http://writenowbooks.org/?book=welcome-to-luxembourg#comment-935 Wed, 27 Jan 2016 09:25:24 +0000 http://writenowbooks.org/?post_type=book&p=4196#comment-935 You don’t have your works cited completed and some of the pages have too much writing. You did well in keeping the book organised and you had your 5 human features and 5 natural features. I also like that you have many pictures to support your text and give more understanding. Also I don’t understand why you have a map of Germany.

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Comment on Welcome to Luxembourg by Alex http://writenowbooks.org/?book=welcome-to-luxembourg#comment-934 Wed, 27 Jan 2016 09:25:09 +0000 http://writenowbooks.org/?post_type=book&p=4196#comment-934 You don’t have the pictures sources.
You should have explained and showed pictures of all your Natural and Human Features.
In some of the pages you have to much writing. I don’t understand why you have a map of Germany

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Comment on The hunted – Juan Ponce de Leon’s journey of conquer by Aaron Delanea http://writenowbooks.org/?book=the-hunted-juan-ponce-de-leons-journey-of-conquer#comment-269 Sun, 26 Apr 2015 13:49:15 +0000 http://writenowbooks.org/?post_type=book&p=4031#comment-269 I really like how you tell this story from the perspective of a Native American.

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Comment on The great Exploration of Vasco Núñez de Balboa by Aaron Delanea http://writenowbooks.org/?book=the-great-exploration-of-vasco-nunez-de-balboa#comment-268 Sun, 26 Apr 2015 13:29:24 +0000 http://writenowbooks.org/?post_type=book&p=4028#comment-268 I liked how your images really connected to your story and helped the reader understand the story.

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Comment on The Adventures of Hernando de Soto by Aaron Delanea http://writenowbooks.org/?book=the-adventures-of-hernando-de-soto#comment-267 Sun, 26 Apr 2015 13:24:31 +0000 http://writenowbooks.org/?post_type=book&p=4027#comment-267 I really liked the dedication section.

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Comment on How America got its name by Aaron Delanea http://writenowbooks.org/?book=how-america-got-its-name#comment-266 Sun, 26 Apr 2015 13:22:50 +0000 http://writenowbooks.org/?post_type=book&p=3722#comment-266 I really like all the widgets that you have included in the book to help readers learn about Amerigo.

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