Another missing comma on page 14

Bug #584790 reported by Mo-Yu Mandy Zhou on 2010-05-24
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Affects Status Importance Assigned to Milestone
Ubuntu Manual
Low
Kevin Godby

Bug Description

Version: 788
Chapter and page number: 1, page 14
Type: grammar

There should be a comma after the word 'way' in the second line of the third paragraph under 'Installing Ubuntu'. Alternatively, the sentence could be rephrased, as the phrase 'that way' sounds a little awkward (maybe "This will ensure that"?)

Kevin Godby (godbyk) wrote :

I went with "This will ensure that...". This fix will appear in the second edition. Thanks!

Changed in ubuntu-manual:
assignee: nobody → Kevin Godby (godbyk)
milestone: none → edition-2
importance: Undecided → Low
status: New → Fix Committed
Changed in ubuntu-manual:
status: Fix Committed → Fix Released
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