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Review:Atomic says:
Hi again!

Absolutely amazing chapter! I'm actually turning twenty very soon, and you managed to capture my feelings perfectly. You described them so eloquently, too. I absolutely adore your narrations, they are so very lovely.

Dialogue was great! Felt very natural and in character.

Flow in this chapter was great, but I feel like the overall story is moving along slowly. So far it's just been average days in Cho's life (well, besides her birthday) and I'm very curious to see where you're going to take the plot.

Characterization was good as always. I really liked the appearance of Angelina here, you did a great job with her character and her reunion with Alicia.

Great job with the chapter, though! It was very realistic and very well written as usual!

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