17 Examples ● ♦ Patricia’s story The horse Patricia, 5 th grader, is a low- achievement student (level 2/5); The first evaluation of her text, using the usual Grid, penalized the formal problems (8/20 ≡ 40%); R2L criteria confirmed the formal (spelling, …), discursive problems (Lexis, Reference, Appraisal), and genre problems (although a rough mastery of Stages) — 19/42 ≡ 45%).