From bbolker at gmail.com  Sun Apr  8 19:45:09 2018
From: bbolker at gmail.com (Ben Bolker)
Date: Sun, 8 Apr 2018 13:45:09 -0400
Subject: [Rd] suggested patch for messages
Message-ID: <CABghstTbEB1Y2TbvxvEN8iEy7psi3wAb75m0WOEr4eOZvUj6WA@mail.gmail.com>

Does anyone have comments on the new wording here?

Suggested:

The Title field should be in title case. Current version is:
   (xxx)
In title case this would be:
   (Xxx)

Hoping R core will see this here and magically adopt it, otherwise
I'll try posting it to the r bugs site ...

===================================================================
--- src/library/tools/R/QC.R    (revision 74551)
+++ src/library/tools/R/QC.R    (working copy)
@@ -7727,8 +7727,10 @@
                 "The Title field starts with the package name."
             },
             if(length(y <- x$title_case)) {
-                paste(c("The Title field should be in title case,
current version then in title case:",
-                        sQuote(y)),
+                paste(c("The Title field should be in title case.
Current version is:",
+                        sQuote(y[1]),
+                        "In title case this would be:",
+                        sQuote(y[2])),
                       collapse = "\n")
             })),
       fmt(c(if(length(x$descr_bad_initial)) {



[Rd] suggested patch for messages
Ben Bolker