Good book, need to stick with it
919442
It is a good book with a lot of details. At points it is a little dull and all facts. .  Starts a little slow but picks up halfway thru it.
2894876
the book may have a high reading level and fairly difficult to understand at times, but if you stick with it I garuntee you will like this book.
2444536
It is an excellent book, but in some spots it kind of drags along while the author is setting up for the next scene. It fits in with the rest of the books, have fun reading it.
2263587
I stopped reading this book at least 3 times, because I could not get into it.  Then a friend told me to just stick with it.  Over a year (and at least 20 books)later, it is the book I think back to most often.  Once it gets going it doesn't stop, and you will loose sleep to stay up and finish it.  Just hang in there and it will be well worth your while.
4534915
I really did enjoy this book even though I realize it need some help. I read a lot of the other reviews and something did happen about half way through that really seem to mess up the story. Although I don't believe a book has to be a challenge to be good. I personally don't want every novel I read to be a challenge I would rather it be comfortable and call "come pick me up and enjoy"
2421823
Good book but took awhile for me to really get into it.  Don't give up because the book is really excellent.
3858405
I like the premise of the book...lots of good points...but it reads like a story in many places...so not really a reference you can turn to for quick tips, you have to invest yourself in reading it from cover-to-cover.  Still the author brings up a lot of great points.  I would buy it again, however realize you will need to set some time aside to read it.
1276130
Overall a good book and very motivational. Needs to dedicate more time on danger of overleveraging and borrowing too much.
1395800
Just finished the book a couple of minutes ago. I liked it a lot, the story flowed well and it makes you care about the characters a lot. Coming from a person who reads a book or two a week I did see a few problems with it however. One was the large paragraphs seen espically during fight scenes. I'd suggest avoiding long paragraphs that shift dynamics a lot. Like one encounter should be a paragraph. Don't try to cram a bunch of them into one long paragraph. Also when you start dialogue you usually use "he said" or some variant but I'd suggest using the characters name to start and then go on with "he", "she" , or "they". But I can see you put a lot of time, effort, and heart into this book and that's what made it so good. My only advise I give you before you write your sequels is to read. Read different authors and different genres to give you new ideas. Like you said on Off Topic, you're self taught and that's great but you can learn so much from great authors (my favorite example being James Patterson) and their many works.
1364532
I was given a free copy in exchange for an honest review.

I liked this book. It shows a flawed hero and heroine who have both made mistakes but move past them.

I will tell you that the beginning is difficult to get through. Names and events are a little hard to follow, but if you're persistent, you get past those few issues and get to the meat of a good, honest book.
1708925
This was a good book with a good message. It's not one that I couldn't put down but I did keep going back to it because I wanted to finish it
3515196
It took some time to get there, but there are some really valuable tips towards the end of the book. No offense, this book just seems to rattle off story after story of disjointedness, but it pulls it together at the end. I was really looking forward to this book, being a fan of Influence, but I struggled to grind through it until the last 30 pages.. boom, there is gold in there.
3861380
This is one of those books that you kinda have to wade through to get to the payoff (The later books in this series).  I wrestled with this one for a lot longer than it took me to read the first 5 put together.  I am glad I did though because in spite of it's slow start, it really lays the groundwork to reward the reader later on.
4627692
Good book but too many characters to keep up with.
4250594
It started out a bit slow for my taste, but I'm glad I stuck with it. About 1/2 way through the book it gets hard to put down.
1516653
Good book but the author doesn't seem ready to move the story along. The last few books have been filler and back story... But for that is fine because I enjoy the world and his writing.
2722999
I keep starting the book, but keep finding better books to read. I want to finish it and probably will some day, but its not on the top of my list.