Good Story. Too dragged out at times
923500
Liked it. Just avlittle too wordy.
Good story line

Good writer

Looking forward to the next book in the series
4413691
I give this story 3 1/2 stars. It was a good story that bogged down at times. However, it is  plausible that this could actually happen someday. It was a little too technical at times. Overall I enjoyed the book.
1659216
Does bog down in spots but overall a good story
2605843
It is hard to review this book. It was good, the story original and peopled with very interesting characters, however it felt much too long. Possibly because at about the half-way mark the author atarted introducing new characters and it almost felt like a deviation from the original story arc. It was a good story but the pacing could use work- as if the first half needed to be more concise OR it needed to be more than one book.
2661028
Interesting story but lots of repetition. Found it tiring at times
1038953
I liked the story but the narration was back and forth between characters so quickly sometimes that it became distracting.
1377186
It was a good story but a little too slow. Hard to stay interested in certain places. However I did need to stick with it to see how it ended.
1337400
Good story but it at  times dragged.  I stayed with it and ending was a little sad but fairly satisfactorily..
292414
It was a good story but it was too long. There were a lot of really detailed descriptions of objects and places that were unnecessary. Towards the end I just wanted it to over.
3079665
Good story.  Can drag at times but keeps you hanging on edge. I liked it a lot.
4941633
I liked it for the most part put at the end i felt it was being dragged out. I believe there was too much stuffed into the book. I enjoyed the beginning of the book better than the end.
2643258
I enjoyed the story but found it confusing at times. The characters were hard to keep straight as to who was who at times and there were times when the shifts required extra concentration to follow. It seemed to me that time and distance traveled by the characters were often irrational but other than these minor difficulties, it was worth the effort to read.
4457861
Good story and characters but gets somewhat wordy at times.
2023870
This book did evoke a lot of emotion and did keep me on the edge of my seat at times. But I felt like some parts were dragged out a bit much and it could have been a little shortened up. Interesting story however.
401003
Good story. Has the makings of a classic but spends too much time on character development. Could wrap up loose ends better. I'd recommend it to a friend.
2705221
Good story. A bit too much detail causes you to get lost. Still it was a good read.
1353382
I liked the story but I found that it was so draggy. I felt that a lot of the information could have been condensed. It seemed that the author just tried to extend the book.