EDITING, EDITING, EDITING
938380
This book desperately needs editing.  Loved the concept.  I have problems with the shallowness of our lead character, Jim Meade.  I think the author needs to look to an author that has learned to give depth to his lead character, that being Jim Butcher.  Given that I am giving this book 4stars for it's inventiveness.
1230308
I found this book to state the obvious (to me) more than it did anything else. If you're very new to editing, or feel the need to learn by reading (as opposed to doing) you'll probably get something out of it.
3506311
Enjoyed this, but OMG, does it ever need editing, no matter how many editors it lists. Reign, rein, etc. are mixed up. Lots more similar things. Overall, it is fast-paced (or should that be paste?  Oh no, that's the kind of mistakes that show up here.)  I could list a lot of other errors, but there would be no point in doing that. This person has talent, but this book would be improved by GOOD editing. As someone commented, it has the feel of a movie. That's not bad.
3567141
Needs editing - whole paragraphs repeated and some other issues as well.  Good story.
4170176
makes fine editing a piece of cake @ a fraction of the time.  vendor had product delivered WELL before the stated due date.  rate this a 5-star deal for me.  many thanks.
2700086
The author needs to have help with editing before publishing. Maybe he just uses a computer program and tells the story. Nice job in spite of the flaws.
2039498
This is the worst job of editing I have ever run across. I really liked the story, but the errors are way too numerous. It's as if a 6 year old did the editing. It distracts from the story line and some sentences made no sense because of it. Too bad no one checked it before publishing.
4973620
For the third time in this series, I have been thoroughly entranced
by the story, yet dismayed and frustrated by the incredibly poor editing. I am so tired offering words used incorrectly, used in the wrong context, and whole phrases used incorrectly, changing the intended meaning
 I will continue to read the remainder of the books in the hope that the editing got better.  I the  editor was used throughout, I hope Mr. Somers finds a new one for future works.
2888071
All of it...from the characters and storyline to the issues with the editing.  Second story I have read by this author...same issues in both.
685972
good stuff interresting but man get somerbody to edit I mean f.grammer some thing may be boy oh boy what a drag to go through somer off set. Good thoughts of other people put into bad writing to make it digestable to the average infuntile american inte lick tual.
Happy weeding IT IS Sping isn't it> Melanie
2264559
I enjoyed this book and I enjoyed Inheritance. However, the editing in both books was horrible! Words left out or extra words put in sentences. There were times that you just put your own words in to make the sentences make sense. A revised edition of both books would be appreciated.
1066400
I have not finished the book yet. I am halfway through. The book is very good, the problem is what most reviewers mention, the editing. Books that are long but are not repetitive, can be read fast. This one Have a lot of great moments, but at the same time there are points when it just completely slows down.
597103
Do not like the removal of spelling/grammar short cuts. Have to go to the tool bar to edit, very time consuming.
375643
Although this little book is, admittedly, a sincere attempt at inviting insight into the introverted mind it is in such obvious need of critical editing that it really isn't worth spending the penny per thought that this e-book will cost you.  It is, much to my disappointment, a grammatical nightmare.  To say, as a different reviewer has done, that this book needs "just a bit of editing" is, in my own opinion, a laughable understatement.  One of the most seriously annoying complaints that I have as an avid, hardcore reader is that while we may live in the age of "anyone can publish anything" we are also apparently living in the age of "without regard to editing of any sort".  I really do despise investing time and money to read something that wasn't even taken seriously enough by it's author to warrant editing and this book is a perfect example.
1088325
This is another in a list of books giving online dating tips. The author breaks the rules (suggestions) into 33 tips. All are good, are doable and make sense. He not only says do this or do that, he gives examples which helps. Hey, it can't hurt to learn more to ultimately find a long term partner or whoever it is you are looking for.

My only problem with the book is editing, seems only untrained monkeys edit these as I found a myriad of errors.....  I would think in this day and age these would be minimal but I am finding that with this type of book this is more normal than the exception. What a shame.
277417
A lack of professional editing was distracting (misspelled words, word repetition and punctuation errors). However, the content was interesting and well written. In spite of the lack of editing, the book was an enjoyable read.
2877882
This has a lot of pictures,and some information. A plus on subject matter;a minus on editing.
 The only problem I have is you reading about the subject, and when you turn the page there nothing to finish. Three time so far the editing left globs of continued subject matter on the floor,and not in the book.
 I would tell the author to choose another publisher. I would tell the publisher to get honest proof readers.