good read, bad editing! looking forward to next series!
921494
Poor editing, however, I very much enjoyed the story line! Looking forward to the next series! You've got a great imagination! This series does very much play off of the "Sons of Anarchy" television series!
816533
Love the characters and the story! Would have given 5 stars, but there are some rather glaring editing mistakes. If you can get around those, it's an enjoyable read!
1071550
I enjoyed the book, even though the shifters were a little wimpy at times.

I'm glad this was the complete collection and not the tiny novellas (sorry I'm just tired of all these tiny novellas authors are putting out lately!) and was able to enjoy the whole story at once!

My biggest problem with the book was you thanking your editor at the end...you either need a new one, or the one you have needs to actually pays attention to spelling and errors!  One or two are forgivable, but she missed MANY mistakes dear and that just makes you look bad and her even worse.  Other then the errors I loved the story!!  :)
3690614
4 stars...would have been more except for the dreadful editing.  Note: spell check isn't perfect.  There, their and they're are not interchangeable.
That aside, the book moves along at a great pace.  The characters are well drawn and easy to like.
All in all, get it, read it and enjoy it!
4747521
The plot and characters were compelling. I googled the series and was pleased to see there are more. I'm glad she has a good following and hopes she continues to do well.

The only thing that turned me way off was the editing. Soooooo many errors. Punctuation, spelling, syntax. It stopped me so often, I wanted to reach out to the author and offer her a free reprint correction edit. To see in her credits page that she supposedly had this manuscript edited before publishing... it was clear it wasn't professionally edited whatsoever. Even a spell and grammar check offered through Word would have caught some of the plethora of errors. It was a bit mind-boggling.

I really do hope the next few books are cleaner and the errors don't get in the way of the enjoyable story. I would have given her work four stars definitely.
345810
I really enjoyed this book, the story line was a lot of fun, and I would have loved to see this book as an actual Stargate Atlantis episode.  The characters were great and true to the TV show.  My only complaint would be the editing of the book.  I found so many typos and grammar mistakes! Whoever the editor was better find another profession, usually I can keep on reading the book and not care, but this book is full of them, to the point where it became distracting.  Other than the typos, the story line was great, very detailed and the characters well described.
3733465
I love the series, characters are good,  story is fun,  very entertaining.  My only beef is that it needs some proofreading and editing.  A lot if the banter is annoying rather than fun,  especially in Max's story,  but starting in the main plot now too.  Also some sentences don't make sense, "approximately 100 square feet in diameter" Is it 100 square feet, or 100 feet in diameter, the final thing is the use of a dash "approximately 3-4 yards" very annoying to try to read, if you're in a story you want words not symbols.

Keep up the good work, and I hope it gets better.
1702785
I've enjoyed the series, and will continue to follow the story but...please have someone who can spell proofread the next one. There are a few typos, but by far the most annoying is that every time (and there are many) the author uses the word plain, or complain, or explain (or any variation) it's spelled plane...complane...explane...complaned...explaned...Arrrggghhhh. Otherwise, it's an enjoyable entertaining read.
4179546
The story was awesome but there was so many spelling mistakes and grammatical errors that it was driving me nuts! The editor should be fired! Other then that it was great story. Lots of action and adventure. Can't wait to read the next book. Just hope there are way less errors because it's very distracting.
2689318
The story is excellent, and I love that the series has continued, but I do wish there was some good editing being done.
4027284
I loved this series, the author has a great premise and a really good book.  The problem I have is with the editing of this series.  My 3rd grader could do a better job with basic grammar, placement of punctuation and SPELLING!!!  This nearly ruined a good book for me!  I ended up correcting the book(s) as "fun" so that I could keep reading them without just giving up on the whole series in total frustration.  For god's sakes, invest in an editor or editing program and check your work!!!!
1641622
This was a good story, but a very quick read, and read a bit choppy at times.  It was also pretty slow paced, and I found myself skimming over parts just so I could get through to the end.  I enjoy reading series books, and who can argue with a 99 cent book.  I thought the storyline was a good one - though pretty far fetched - and I think the author is on the right track with this series, she just needs more experience.  And possibly a new editor.

***Update:  I am currently reading the.latest book in this series, and so far I would give
Five stars!!  The writing is flowing much better in book. 3, the editing is good, and I am having a hard time putting it down!
3030001
**Spoiler Alert**

I've read the entire ghost series so far and love them!  Great intrigue, fantastic situations, great descriptive scenes in a VERY richly devised society. Some of my examples may have spoilers, so caution!

Seriously though, I would give every book in the entire series a 5 star rating were it not for the GROSS grammatical errors.  For instance "...and his HILT dropped to the HAND of his sword." This and many MANY other editing (or conversion(?)) errors that should NOT have appeared in a professionally written book were very detracting from the story.

This and other things such as story errors (the author's fault in this case - not the editors) inconsistencies such as (to name just one)of WHEN Caina had seen her father last, in some areas throughout the series the author says she saw him last in the library, glassy eyed and unmoving, in other places it mentions dead by the hand of Maglarion, which occured an uncounted number of days later in Maglarion's hideout.  This is an inconsistency that should NOT happen!  There are many more of these story inconistencies here and there.

As I said, were it not for these egregious errors, I would rate the entire series, EVERY book, a 5 Star Rating.
2899904
Lovely read, once you get past all of the mistakes. Spacing, grammatical and punctuation mistakes are common but not to big of deal. Most newer books,  especially the for Kindle are riddled with errors. Aside from that, I enjoyed the book and cannot wait to finish the series. The story is laid out pretty well and I enjoy getting the P.O.V. from multiple characters. I won't give anything away because I do not like spoilers myself. Give the book a chance and you won't regret it!
288584
I would have given it five stars but it needs editing. I enjoyed the premise for the plot, one I haven't seen before.  Now I am off to purchase another in this series. Enjoy!
3624313
I truly enjoyed this mystery and would have given it 5's if there hadn't been so many editing mistakes!  The were sentences missing words, or weren't in the proper order, or the wrong word altogether. There was even a an instance where the same sentence was repeated twice consecutively. The mystery itself was well plotted, and the mail character "Aaron" was interesting for the most part. The ending was unexpected if not surprising.  Glad I read this one!
3766618
Enjoyed ths book as much as the first in the series. Good characters, compelling plot and twists that keep you interested.  As an inveterate second hander the general topic is fun! What has not been fun is the slipshod proofreading of this series. For this I blame the publisher, not the author. Hopefully, as the series progresses this can be ironed out. Definately will continue to read the series.