Poor quality porn in writing.
935494
Not well written, no plot, and quite shockingly quick into poorly described sex scenes. It's as if the author has watched poor quality pornography and then tried to summarize it in writing.
4789478
This book was all porn...was very disappointed
1165953
I can't read or speak Spanish, so I haven't the foggiest idea about the quality of this book as written erotica.  I picked it up because it was in the "Art & Photography -> Photography -> Erotica" section for Kindle books.  As such...it sucks.  Half a dozen images of erotica, which are censored to the PG level; no naughty bits exposed, because they are comically covered by ridiculous pasted-in stickers.  No points for you!
1822336
Kindle Unlimited, bio says enjoys writing 'smut', this was not smut, it was trash; no real plot, no character development, cardboard characters, fill in the blank {bad} stories, 70's porn music in the background fighting with wannabe 50 shades of grey and twilight nonsense. 'Romance' is not graphic sexual situations, and especially not those that are as graphically detailed out, for lack of anything actual worthwhile to put in to the 'story'.  For actual writers usually list other books; for this type just name 'writer' Becca Fanning not bloody likely, will take the time to rate all the trash out though.
3448224
This book has poor character development.  The plot is written as if it were written by a low budget porn movie writer.  Toss in some rape, physical abuse, sex slavery and a "cliff hanger ending" and that pretty much sums up this piece of trash.  I am by no means a prude.  I have read many pieces of erotica and very much enjoyed it.  But, even the sex scenes were not well thought out and developed enough to adequately develop an erotic sex scene in the mind of the reader.  Do yourself a favor and don't waste your time.
2673383
Overpriced pornography with no useful information. Guy goes on vacation, meets some hookers writes a "book". Seriously doubt all of these girls pictured in the book are the real thing and if they are then long gone. Join a grain or two outdated truth, mixed in with some bull-s, to make it seem entertaining. Real price of the book should be about 50 cents. Low quality.
521378
This movie has porn written all over it.  Except the nudity has been edited out or non existent. As soon as the director sells the rights to Vivid, it'll be 3 stars.
2819013
Though it is based on a story from the Bible,  it is semi-pornagraphic. Also contains tons of pagan worship practices. Of, as is standard for current culture, all of the characters who are heroes in the Bible arejerks in this book. No redeeming value. I didn't finish it because it is bigotted crap.
3277999
I didn't want to give it even one star but did so that I could write a review. There wasn't any substance at all in the story. If you like porn then you'll love this book. 2 guys and a girl and even the sex scenes were boring. Don't waste your time.
2722801
If you are looking for 3 some porn, you found it!  Story is so slopped together!  Almost like the author was in a hurry to get this out.  Very disappointed.  Storyline has so many great possibilities, but unfortunately the author chose to skimp!  I would skip this one!
4863450
This book is filled with ragged story-telling, characters with no depth, lack of believable motivation and naive pseudo-science. Do not waste your time. While I appreciate the author's goal of writing a novel before she turned thirty, this result is sawdust with occasional episodes of soft porn thrown in. If that's what you are seeking, be my guest, but it's your money.
119264
Book was written solely for raunchy filthy sex scenes. No depth, no real plot line, no likable characters. This writer goes on my avoid list.
863404
This is just porn for women - and not all women at that.  Tried to throw in a little bit of "plot" (practically non-existent) so it could be called a story.  I found it very distasteful and I am NOT a prude!

I will never download any of the "books" with this cover again - even free.
577516
Is there anything below one star?
Dear God- I cannot imagine this could be worse. The grammar is deplorable. Yes- even smut needs grammar-the typos- wow - and just...

OK- apologies to the author- seriously, if she was my best friend I would have said that too and spared her the publishing. Not my first time to read drafts. There is a core here- there is something that can really go forward- but it is not at Publish level. The writer is finding herself and will reach a level of comfort- this isn't it.

That aside - from a get me wet POV- because really, why else does one read porn? Pretty close- Hey at $0 you have nothing to lose - but you get what you pay for.
4381630
My wife reads these trashy novels.  It's like soft porn with a love story.  Gross!
2613795
This book is nothing but porn.  "Full of surprises" means that the language is filthy and the content is disgusting. I gagged thru the first chapter hoping it would get better but it didn't.  Then I deleted it from my library.  Amazon - please develop better filters for loyal readers such as myself.
178151
This book was nothing but soft porn.  Horrible.  Bad character development, almost like a 16 year old wrote it after watching porn on the computer.  There is nothing positive to say about this book at all.  One of my theories is that this is Watson's first manuscript and it was turned down so he then wrote Before I Go To Sleep.  After that book was successful, then his published decided to run with this one.  My other theory would be Watson got distracted while writing and decided to write about what was distracting him.  He will have to write a Pulitzer Prize winning book to get me to read any new novel that he might write.