Too much sex but not enough story. I wish there was more story as I enjoy stories about shape changers but although I certainly
931528
. When Chistine takes the time to write a good story that is when the yarns get better. In her dark series one of her books was a stand out Dark Demon  and it was because she took the time to write a great yarn.
3895964
The middle story was way too kinky for me, so I stopped in the middle. The first and last stories were way over the top sex with a few pages of plot.  The concept of the town was great and the first book had an excellent plot, but it seemed as though as sex scenes increased plot time diminished. I love paranormal romance and cops and firefighters but there wasn't enough story for me.
2669363
I really loved this story. Chastity and Magnus were both great, but I needed just a little more story and a little less sex. I know that sounds crazy, but I just needed a more from this..
4524046
This story of bird shifters could have great potential if it had more story substance. It was a pretty smutty book mixed in with some humerous moments. I don't appreciate having a book start out with sexual content within a few pages. It cheapens the story
3878551
There was a little bit of a story around a lot of sex.  Come on who really has that much sex, and it's always mind blowing.  I don't think so.  I think more story and less sex would have made it better.  I know this is only fiction but there has to be some reality to it.  I couldn't wait to get to the end.  I will not be reading any more books in the series.  I give it 2 stars because there was a decent story hiding in there somewhere.
3463791
I love urban fantasy and paranormal mysteries for the story lines, but many try too hard to be erotica instead and end up too corny to read. In the beginning this book was nearly offensive in its description of how some men were so beautiful that the heroine could not control her own sexuality. Also a 6'4" woman who cannot comfortably carry a 20lb. Scottish terrier through the woods is a bit of a stretch for my vivid imagination. If you're looking for fantasy men who will save a damsel in distress then bed her this will appeal to you. The end got a little more interesting so I will probably read one more to see if the improvement is continued.
2652295
I loved the story, kept me interested and wanting to know more.  I feel a little over the top with the sex.  Some things can be said and left to the imagination.  Nothing was left out in describing the sex between the two people. If you like smut, then it works.
498202
The story should have been developed more, instead of just the sex scenes.  I would have told about the first days of being mated to a shifter, meeting the pack, and having your life turned upside down. Not worth the money.
981785
This story of fantasy, mystery sorcery etc. was well written, however her sex organs played too large a part in the story, every male wanted her, both in this world and also the netherworld. The book was written well enough for me to read book #2 of this saga, and hopefully, the action will still be there, but the fascination of her sex life will not be so excessive.
4052010
SPOILER ALERT

I didn't expect Luke to fall so easily.  I thought his sex would be more kinky.  There was too much sex and not enough story.  I missed not having the other guys in the book more.
2449468
I liked the MCs, but there was way too much backstory.  I really wanted to see more in their current  relationship development.  Some good plot twists & I am always up for Arthurian legends!  But, not really sure I would read the next one.
2139615
Okay I have to say, I gave this three stars, not because it was a bad story, but because it dragged for me; and because I found the torrid love scenes at times overblown and in appropriate for the action that was supposedly happening to and around them.

Also I would advise buying these stories singly instead of as a bundle.  I say this because, if I hadn't bought as a bundle, and didn't feel compelled to move to the next story immediately, I might have felt more favorable to the stories themselves.

As a whole I liked the stories and the concept, but I found myself just wanting the author to get on with the real underlying story and events and less of the hot, sweaty sex. Which is a real eye opener as I usually love that aspect of the shifter stories.  I find the erotic nature of these man/beasts extremely provocative and tantalizing, but for some reason, these stories just had too much and it interfered with my enjoyment of the plot and the stories.

I would buy them again as separate stories that I could take a break from and then resume and I think that might be the key to this series.  One story at a time with a break between each one.
2772076
This story would have been good if it would have had a little more interaction with the two main characters...other than sex that is.  Now don't get me wrong I love the erotica romances so that wasn't the problem I just didn't think the main characters, Willow the human and Seth the vampire, connected on any level except sexually. The two meet in a club after Willow decides to play her sisters games and sit on Seths lap and ask him personal questions.  Instead of building the sexual tension by having the two dance around the issue for at least a chapter they immediately have sex, lots of sex with really no story line.  It had such promise but didn't follow through for me.  I doubt I purchase book 2.
2635041
The story was good it had all the elements of a good read however there was too much sex which lowered the quality of the book. It also lacked an epilogue.
2230608
I love Feehan's books i was excited to read a new storyline I am not a prud but this book had way too many pages devoted to having sex 5-8 in a row which didnot leave enough room for a plot .......
2792427
Good story but would have been better if the author would have told portions of the story through the male character also so you could feel the depth of character. Told just through the female viewpoint sort of dulls the story a bit. But overall the execution wasn't bad and main character was likable. I enjoyed that she had a bit of spunk and she was a BBW! There should be more females leads portrayed as plus size because after all "BBW's do it better"
4584917
I was expecting this to be the last book and it isn't she is writing more.  I'll read the next one but I think this one was a little over done with the sex scenes.