It sucked so bad don't ever read it
922620
Sucks so bad WAT DOING READING THIS CRAPPY NOT SVEN TWENTY PAGED STUPID SUCKY NOT WORTH IT NOT EVEN BOOK
4834119
Don't ever think to read this book. I've read it and it was horrible. There was no emotion or excitement. The plot had been dominated by the boringness (if there even was a plot). The worst part is that it actually gets exciting at the end (by the way, the book is seventy pages)and then it just stops. Do not read this book. It sucks!
4834854
sucked really hated it them will never buy anything from chuck emerson again not worth downloading as a free book
3512048
I am an avid reader and in of the 1000's of books I've read in my lifetime, this is the only one that I put into the trash. The characters are horrible people. The story wanders all over the place. Read some of the other 1 star reviews. They pretty much nail it. I bought it for my 14 year old who is a mature reader and he read it before I did. I was sorry to not read it first. Interestingly, he agreed that it is a terrible book, terrible characters, and had really no redeeming qualities. We are avid book readers, yet he did not stop me from throwing it away. It's too bad. The idea is a good one and is what intrigued me enough to buy it, but it did not meet our expectations at all.
3163393
I don't usually write many reviews, but when something is this bad I just need to write something to save someone their money.  This is quite possibly one of the worst books I have ever read. The idea was promising, I liked the Raven character initially - sexy mechanic chic.  In another review someone mentioned this was an "insta-love" story. And I was thinking hey I can do insta-love, I read 50 shades of grey and liked it despite the idiotic inner goddess.  This book is a whole new low.  There is NO suspensful chase, it is literally an anti climactic insta-love written terribly and predictably through and through. The characters are one dimensional, no evolution at all.  Major flaws in the plot line too. I found myself skimming it to the end, I don't understand how this can have such rave reviews.
1784344
I would not recommend it to anyone. Grossly shallow, you can get the same knowledge just reading the chapters titles.
2264498
This has to be the dumbest book I have ever read.  I still can't believe I wasted my time reading it.  I kept hoping it would develop some redeeming qualities, but it never did.  Not only was Lacey the most stupid and bungling person you could imagine, but she wasn't even funny.  Nor was the rest of the story.  This book is a slur on women in general, as evidenced by what Lacey and her best friend Meg did, but it probably was also a slur on the Mafia (though it's hard to imagine that).  I don't object to poking fun at people and things, but this book was so absurd that it wasn't even funny.  Save your money (or, if you got it for free like I did), delete it from your Kindle and save yourself a lot of misery.
3893535
This was a truly awful book. A profoundly boring, unoriginal, uninspired attempt at a story. I was embarrassed as I read it. Well, began to read it. It's a tiny book, but 1/2 thru, I couldn't take it anymore.

I don't know how this ever got published. It feels like watching Law & Order episodes from 1990. Dated and unnecessary.

It's such a shame. What a waste of resources on this Garbage.

Maybe 80 year olds shouldn't be encouraged to try new things.
It's just depressing to know an educated adult wrote this.

It deserves negative stars.
-5*
3663915
I read the whole book thinking it would get better, but it didn't. It was an absolute waste of my time. I have the name of this author etched in my brain and will not think twice about passing him by.
2245234
scary clown and the pink.
don't read it.
it was not good.
it sucks

don't forget about the pink

fu
1772668
I was totally confused by it.  I thought the lead character Hierro was a baby and an idiot. It sucked period not at all like the other novellas I have seen. I really wish I didn't have to rate this crap. Worst I have ever seen.
403247
sorry to say but it was a terrible book- I kept putting it down and even thought about not finishing it- which I did put it a side several times and than went back to it cause I hate not finishing books- but don't waste your money- borrow for free if you can and want to read it based on other peoples reviews - for me it was not a good read
97002
This book is awfull, I wish I never read it.
3933661
just totally bad....I thought it was going to be a good read but it was just unbearable.....sorry I picked it up.
50
It had the worst ending I've ever read.  Too much killing and not enough depth.  I wouldn't recommend this book to anyone
1927486
It's inept garbage.  I keep kicking myself for reading to the end, thinking it HAD to get better.
371129
I know an author doesn't want to be known for writing a horrible book, but this one truly is horrible.  The writing is really bad.  The writers try to stuff as much geek humor into the book as possible and as such the dialog is really forced.  Do you know how a guy will smell something really bad, then tell his friend "Hey, you have to smell this, it really stinks!" and so the friend has to smell it?  Well, that's about the same for this book. I read it all the way to the end and it was so bad, I had to refer the book to two other people so they could read how bad it was.  My one friend said it was "so bad it was good".