Too much sex, not enough story
935502
Way too much sex, felt cheated after paying so much for the book. As bad as the last one, I have all of the dark books. Seems like the end of the series is close. Don't think I'll be buying anymore.
1080396
No real story advancement, just sex. It didn't feel like a novel, it was more like a novella or short story.
3878551
There was a little bit of a story around a lot of sex.  Come on who really has that much sex, and it's always mind blowing.  I don't think so.  I think more story and less sex would have made it better.  I know this is only fiction but there has to be some reality to it.  I couldn't wait to get to the end.  I will not be reading any more books in the series.  I give it 2 stars because there was a decent story hiding in there somewhere.
4524046
This story of bird shifters could have great potential if it had more story substance. It was a pretty smutty book mixed in with some humerous moments. I don't appreciate having a book start out with sexual content within a few pages. It cheapens the story
284859
You have to really like sex in order to like this book. It was amusing, but I found the humor to be very over-the-top and like it was trying too hard. The characters were likeable, albeit a little one dimensional, but my biggest issue with the book is that nothing happened except people thinking about and (SPOILER ALERT) eventually having sex. Over and over. There was very little conflict to deepen the plot, and I felt like every scenario was "too good to be true", even when the incident at the end happened, it was resolved very quickly. The story was not believable, it seemed more like a sitcom (so if you're into that sort of read, go ahead). But overall you have to really really like reading about sex to enjoy this book.
1934741
It was OK but too much sex. I  have always liked Sandra Brown's books but this one did not enough story..but a lot of sex
742869
Ifound myself thumbing through perhaps a third of the book to get to the story. The story was good. The sex scenes were overblown and way too many!
Geesh! The story would have been only about 150 pages if I had been able to edit it. It would also been worth the price. As it stands, it is not.
You are a good story teller, don't get bogged down with  100 pages of gratuitous sex. One or two scenes would have been plenty and not obscured a good story.
Just sayin' .
2816824
There could have and should have been so much more to this story but it got so weighted down by constant sexual
and very graphic sex scenes I just gave up after awhile.  All right he loves her, she finally loves him - is it necessary
for the reader to have to read about it on an almost constant basis.  Heck the demons take a back seat here~!
2924767
Way too much sexual content for me....the ending was especially disappointing
1457480
This story could have been much better than it was. There was too much tell and not enough show to the story. Not much character or world building at all. A good writer could have create a heck of a series of books with great characters and plots. This author is just in too much of hurry and doesn't bother to fill in all the holes. It's pretty much the bare bones of a story surrounding lots of sex. If she put half the time into fleshing out her stories as she does plotting sex scenes, she might actually do really well.
4075083
This story had much too much sex and not enough substance.  I was looking for a new author and am not sure this is the one.  I will try another of her books to see if it changes my mind.
2038903
Romance novels, especially erotic ones, are usually expected to have as much plot as sex. This one....not so much.  There was a lot of sex, boring sex (who would've though), and not a lot to endear you to the characters. However, as a book necessiary to pass the time, it did it's job. It was not too bad, or too good.
2171223
Could have been 5stars but again story ruined by too much sex.  Writer should have kept to the story.
1946483
I really wanted to like this book. The cover is beautiful, the beginning VERY engaging! In the beginning I was very interested in learning what happened to the main character's love interest. What made him "tick". Soon, I learned this book would lead me on winding circles to nowhere. Now to be far, I did not finish this book. I read 75% of it. BUT since I read that much of the book I feel comfortable not recommending this book. The sex is good, so is the book idea, but the execution is tedious. When I read erotica I only want a story just so it won't seem like I'm addicted to erotic books. This book has WAY too much story. It needed more. Think "Honor Student" more (though that series went down-hill, but that's another story completely...)
1327558
i think more story and less sex might make this book more appealing...
3304258
too much sex.the story was good,i liked the characters.but there are pages upon pages of detailed sex.
3521887
I can't believe one can actually get tired of reading about sex. Mind you, sex is great, but the story needs more substance than this book provides. Hints and I'll-teel-you-more-someday do not make a story. The ending went from highly traumatic to an abrupt ending.