Instruct: Classify Amazon reviews into positive or negative sentiment
Query: not good

I picked this book up from the libary when I was a small kid and I remeber it confused the crap out of me. Then I re-read it again when I was thirteen, again it was still alittle confusing and plus the characters had no depth and the caracter development (if you want to call it that) was shaky and incomplete.Not good at all Nancy, It had potenital but the grammer needs alot of help and vocabulary needs to be ajusted for the traget audience plus the characters need more edge. Besides that you had a good story I suggest you read Stephan King's "on writting: a memoir of a craft" it just may help. and oh...about names "potter", "lily"and "james"... you and I know there common names in america but just in case you didn't know, there also very common in england and in scotland and in ireland, so it doesn't suprise me you and j.k. choose the same names. it's called a conicidence!