Instruct: Classify Amazon reviews into positive or negative sentiment
Query: He needs a good editor

I purchased this book from the author at a convention two years ago. Reading it was a somewhat painful experience. Although there are some excellent concepts, his use of language is immature and highly repetitive. Everything is "like" something else. Some of his comparisons are so far-fetched, even after long pondering, the point is lost.I believe this must be a first effort and a self-published book. It is in need of the blue pencil of a good editor, and at least one re-write.As a collector of vampire tales, I am happy to have it in my library, but I would be hard pressed to recommend this to anyone but a hard core reader of tales of the undead.