I couldn't get into this. The dialogue was immature ...
340177
I couldn't get into this. The dialogue was immature while at the same time having a Neon Genesis Evangelion vibe to it. Except the fighting robots surfed airwaves. The story picked up near the end and I'd give the next volume a try but not at this point.
2155421
Way to much internal dialogue in this story for me. I just couldn't get into it. It isn't a horrible book just not my cup of tea.
92826
More immature than I expected. The dialogue and storyline are not for the mature reader. Had a hard time bringing myself to finish. May be interesting for teens though.
523145
Couldn't get into this and didn't finish watching it, unfortunately.
249710
I'm having a hard time getting into this book. It's filled with semantics and dialogue that makes conversations drag on and on without progressing the story. The words are repetitive to the point of silliness. It makes unnecessary drama that is hard to read without rolling my eyes and wondering if there would ever be an end to this scene. I'm only a few chapters in so I may give it another chance.
2231982
I was ready to really get into some serious character development with this one, but I was sadly mistaken.  Yes the sex scene between the 30 something woman and 20 something man lived up to what you would expect.  But nobody's character was well-defined enough to make me understand the whys behind the relationship.  I didn't LIKE any particular character in this book.  And at one point I was actually just wishing that the daughter would hurry up and find out so we could move on from the "made-up" drama.  I thought this was a great idea for a book, but the dialogue, lack of character development and lack of a male/female relationship that you could actually root for just made me quickly read this book and put it in my "never to be touched again" category.
562879
I couldn't get into this book. I got maybe 30 pages and quit because I can't stand the main character's sense of humor. It may be called "gritty" or "edgy" but I think that it's immature and twisted.
2315699
I couldn't watch it because I couldn't understand the dialogue and there was no closed captioning available.
1442590
The plot of this story had potential, but I just couldn't get past the ridiculous dialog between the main characters. No real person speaks in this manner and I found it distracting. The fact that the readers had to be reminded several times that Jordan may have a country accent, but wasn't a hick, was annoying. It took me out of the story to the point where I just gave up and stopped reading it altogether.
2601560
It's TOO long. The main character seems to go into these rants/ramblings constantly, suspending the story for long descriptions and musings about things that in the end don't add anything to the storytelling. I forced myself to pull through because I cared for the characters, but there were scenes, dialogue and situations that felt very superfluous.
1482717
I have tried three times to get into this book. The characters are predictable and the dialogue is dull.
689829
The characters seemed immature and lacked depth. The H and h spent a lot of time was spent introspecting and  overthinking.
3339741
The reading is too immature for me.  I accidently put this on my list of books to read. Didn't want it.
3465863
The immature dialogue did me in.  I felt like I was reading about 16 year old girls however their language was mixed with sexual innuendo and then childish verbiage..very weird and strange.  The first part of the book..(40pages) is interesting and it goes down hill from there.  I.e. "He's such a jerk, ugh". " I've got a crush on him"  ...way too adolescent for me.  Potential plot with a train wreck of characters and annoying, uninteresting dialogue.
2437569
There were a lot of things to like about this book.

The narration was funny and the hero refreshing.

But the company talk was about as entertaining as reading the back of a shampoo bottle. The relationship was uninteresting to me. Probably because they got together so soon, and with hardly any conflict between them.

I tried to finish it. And I failed.
4410776
The dialogue is wooden and unnatural. The characters are cardboard cut-outs that you can never find yourself caring about.
4593826
I have read a lot of books by these authors and have really enjoyed them, but I couldn't make it through this whole book.  The dialogue was on the level of childish which is too bad since there is a good storyline.  There seems to be a rush for authors to get books out quickly and we the readers are the one who suffer for it.  Was hoping the Coopers wouldn't fall into the category but seems they have.  Hope this is a one time deal because as stated I have enjoyed other books of theirs.