Could have been better
350642
The price was enticing. The leather punch works, but one of the snap tools has a loose piece and does not line up correctly, so I can only assemble the male ends of the snaps. The snaps are very small (4mm) and are not meant for large or heavy duty items, they are meant for thin to moderate cloth. Had I known what I was in for, I would not have purchased this.
3447535
The plot was good just not executed very well. Love movies with action I felt it was dragging at times. Overall okay but could have been much better in my opinion
4036850
Considering that this was written by some fairly well known authors I really expected more. I just didn't spend long enough with any one character to really care about them. I am still slightly stupefied as to why the first couple ended up together - going from finding the other's manner off putting on first meeting to engaged a day or two later with no real reason (except perhaps physical attraction?) just isn't believable for me. I also didn't feel the novel flowed gracefully from one part to the next. I felt it would have been better officially broken into three parts and not just divided into chapters. It was discocerting to suddenly jump points of view and have things broken up with background story (which could have been left out as all relevant parts were brought up later and it would have been more interesting to slowly discover that interlude) plopped down in between two chapters as we switched from part 1 to part 2. Especially for $6.99 (price current as of review if I am remembering correctly) I would not purchase this.
3463145
This story is about a unit of the FUN  that worked on cases involving people who weren't quite people.  There were a lot of people in this unit and their first and last names were used and I never figured out who was who.  Additionally the reason there were different types of people (alpha, gammas  and regular)  was never fully explained and what made each type different from the other was also left out.  It seemed like a good story idea, but it got lost along the way.
1027629
I liked the premise, the style was good, editing was fine, I think the key elements were there, but there could have been more depth.  Perhaps if Aggie has a second novel going into more detail and finishing things off it would help.  She has the potential as an alpha to do so much more against her father--bring him down in some way.  Her mother is supposed to be even more powerful than Aggie and lets herself be relegated to some teeny apartment while the husband brings in a bimbo--again not very alpha.  I haven't read the Natalya books so maybe there could be more there--maybe when they leave her on Natalya's doorstep they could join forces or something, but this novel just didn't have the punch (pun intended) it needed.  Maybe the jumping around from full novels to 0. whatever is part of the problem.
306035
Checked it out at my local library. Could have been much better. The story was kinda predictable. Not the worst, it had potential but it just feelsl like they opted for a quick generic story rather than put the time in to come up with something creative.
2339161
How it all came to be and where it is now would have given a better insight into the club. The history of this club should have been the main idea for this DVD.... It was okay, could have been better.
3848265
It was nice seeing the couples again. There was a great deal of sickeningly sweet exchanges between them, though. Too much was packed into too short of a story. Mac and Connor would have been better in a novel. Some of it seemed rather pointless. There was too much detail taking up space that could have been used to offer more of a plot. I didn't get the point of Anthony getting ill. Why not have more interaction with Dean? Could have been better without the sex scenes, that were bland and uninteresting. Also too choppy, with scenes switching between couples and events. I didn't totally dislike it, I just didn't enjoy it as much as I hoped.
498846
I was not a fan of this short story. Could of been better.
4616055
It was a good concept, a shame that it wasn't better executed though

Pros: Liked the idea of the difference in ages
  Liked that in some respects the heroine was mature
  A good conceptual plot

Cons: misused words
  Some parts read as if the author was stretching to sound as a sophisticated writer. Ended in misused word and stilted
  sentence structure
  The constant tears
  Too much sex
  The drama wasn't quite resolved: Audi told Max that his daughter was the cause of  two of his marriages failing. Nothing
  came of so important a discussion.
  Incorrect tense used often. Present tense was used when clearly it should have been past tense.
  Some of the drama just fell flat and didn't quite ring true. Such as the scene in the ladies' room when Audi was listening to
  two women talking about her and Max. It went from two women to several women. And the women discussing her when she
  was right next to them in the bathroom made no sense.

I'll keep an open mind for the next installment, but the writer needs to get better hold of her craft.
4167930
This is an ok book but I feel it could have been much better. I think the story was too long. Way too many situations happening to the lead character. I want to read something that is somewhat plausible even if it's comedy. I also want to read about a woman who isn't a door mat. Yes, she gained some spunk that last part of the book. She wants to conquer her fears but she can't stand up to her mean and abusive family. She doesn't have any self respect. She sleeps with the H even though she feels he's not really into her.
3138334
It could have been better. I thought both Tanner and Grace we're weak characters. He couldn't keep it in his pants and both couldn't say no to way too much booze. That sort of ruined the story for me and that is my reasoning for the 3 stars.
1297207
I just wish i could have the star. The book wasn't bad but it really did have some lack luster Deus Ex Machina because plot holes. And the Narrator really could have done a better job. I always have the speed setting on normal, and she sounds like shes talking a mile a minute. I'm willing to bet what could have been a 6 hour read was cut short by poor plot planning and a speed mouth narrator.
591605
I don't know what to say about this book except it could've been better. Still a good book but there was definitly something missing for me.
3751723
they were going on adventures. it could have being better
2308252
It could have been better. The hero and heroine both seem very wishy washy. He would think about how much he wanted his wife back and then the next second be thinking that he never thought that only to do it all over again. She would do the same thing about how she wanted him to come after her from the start but then she fought against it when he wanted her to stay with him. He was the one to make the major change in the end and I thought that was unfair because the WHOLE book was about how much his life in this new town with all his friends is so ideal for a family and both characters were constantly praising this place and the people and I was confused about why he would live in a bigger town again after the entire book was in this perfect small one. It was just a bit weird at times.
1618779
This book was fine, but could have been better.  Like most other romances I have read recently, there is very little substance to this book and little character development. So when the H and h get together I'm left feeling as if I missed a 100 pages or so.
But, it seems like that is my problem with almost every romance recently. I'm wondering if the digital age (I read on an electronic device like everyone else) has given us the twitter version of novels.