Good story--just way too short!
343253
I loved the story, but I was just getting into it when it ended.  The ending was very abrupt.  I enjoyed reading it and would recommend it to anybody, but just know it's pretty short!
1977618
This was a good story but way too short & didn't have an ending. Writing could use a little polishing. I felt like I read about two chapters and that was it. What I read in the description of the book I didn't read in this story. I expected more. As I said, I believe this could be a good story if there was more to it.
2708803
Could have been an awesome story if it were longer. Seemed too rushed and ended so abruptly. :-(
4338693
Great story, just too short. The book occurred more like a short story and could have been better with more development of the characters. It is worth reading, but it will leave you a bit less than wanting more; like why wasn't there more?
75374
Great story, but too short. Characters drawn so well Shame is such a pain in the *** and Terric is such a goody goody storywas perfect
2238440
I enjoyed the characters and their internal dialogue, it increased the angst factor of the story without being too heavy.  I assumed the lead character, Drez, was a lot older than the story set up.  But the story is too short.  Upon looking for the next installment, I found them jusr as short.  That changed my mind about he series.  The trend to serialize stories is getting out of control.  This should have been one book, and then proceeded to stories of the other band members.  Im disappointed about leaving this story, but its not worth the cost.
2559140
As a huge fan of Reacher, I loved the story.  The only problem was that it was too short!  More please!
604429
Loved the story, too short though.  Wish it had continued.
2818360
Good story.  Nice writing style.  Wish it were longer!
392125
Wonderful wordsmith!  This story was entirely too brief!  I can think of all kinds of adventures that could have continued the short story into a full novel!  Well worth the read!
3810396
I enjoyed the story but for a book, it was way too short on important details & kept repeating itself on stuff that would have been better written to have filled in those blanks.  Then it went on after you'd think the story was done & nicely wrapped up.  As a Novella, this  could have been a tighter & better wrapped up story.
413050
I liked the story and thought the characters were great, yea their relationship developed quick but that does actually happen sometimes.  What I didn't like was that the book ended at 84% when it wasn't even that long to begin with!! Its pretty clear that the book ended the way it did so the author could get more books out of it. But after saying that I would recommend the book for a quick read and I'm curious to find out what happens to the characters.
529935
I LOVED the story, but the size of the book is too small!!!!! I seriously wish that it was a lot longer than it is!!! Is there a follow-up to this little passage?? PLEASE tell me there is!?!?!?!
450176
This was a good story line with actually a great book. It's just too short. A lot of the urban authors couldn't write a full book if it killed them. I would like to read just one good stand along book that doesn't have a cliffhanger!!!
1967227
This is one of the better self-published stories I've read, and I enjoyed it. The author has a strong voice, and there weren't many glaring grammar/punctuation errors like in so many self-published stories.
However, the story is really short. Yes, it's only 99 cents, but it's more like a serial novel, never ending, where you end up spending a lot to find out what happens.
I wasn't so engaged that I wanted to immediately buy the next one, more because I didn't want to get caught in the trap of having to spend more every few pages.
670744
I enjoyed the "Advice to little girls" . However I was disappointed that the story was only about a page long. bummer  : )
158653
I really liked the story, but darn, it seemed like it was only 30 pages long.  I would rather wait until the first three of these were written and combined into one "normal" book. I won't buy the next couple parts at this price.