I really liked this, but would have liked to see more ...
349958
I really liked this, but would have liked to see more cornflakes in the pack.  There was a lot of rice crispies and mini wheats.  If there was less of these, there could have been more cornflakes.
4540380
Overall I really liked this story. It was a wonderful concept, with a passionate romance and the ending left me thinking there may be a sequel on the way. But the reason I gave it three stars was because I thought it could have had more. I would have loved more scenes showing the government girls working. A couple of the subplots to me did not come to a satisfying conclusion, and the ending almost seemed too abrupt. Nevertheless, it was a good story and the writing was great too.
1435048
The story itself was great and I really want to find out what happens next, so ill probably buy the other books as well. I did feel like there could have been more detail in the writing, so 4 stars. But really great story. I recommend.
1994167
This sad story is handled very tastefully, but I wish there was just a bit more content -- maybe an additional flashback or two?
793007
My only complaint is that I wish there were more pictures!
164985
It was very interesting, but it could have better.
3240610
I enjoyed this a lot. I liked Violet and she worked well with Nate. Her back story with Ryn could have been explored more. If only to make the characters a bit more nuanced.  I hope it will happen in the next book.
3433287
Would  have liked it to be more in detail. Overall good read!
4178593
This was enjoyable for the most part. I think I would have enjoyed this more if he had written more about his present life.
950357
Could have been ... more. But it still had some awesome in it!
1487721
This was a great book! I would love to see more on the characters and have a more developed story but all in all I found it fun, and engaging.
2713590
I had hoped for a bit more from this one.  Hopefully the next installment will be a more interesting. I probably was hoping for more considering the protagonists.  Still, I don't regret buying, and I'll likely try another if it becomes available.
1502037
Although I was lightheaded and smiling while reading this book, (I liked it actually because its an HEA), I felt that there was something missing. I would have loved to read more of Declans past relationships, to better understand his phobia to long-term commitment, and how he came up with the idea that Shelby might just be the one who would tame him and end his runaway days. I would have also loved if there had been a much deeper foundation for Shelbys feelings, instead of just reliving her highschool crush for him. Plus, Chelseas marital issues was also something I would have loved to read more. This was a short read, so I understand some parts had to be shortened and left out. Now, if this would turn into a series, I would love it even more.

Overall, Caught Up In You was an easy read, entertaining and nicely written. I loved the attempt to salvage the father-and-son relationship and how the characters redeemed themselves. I understand Shelbys love for chocolates and shoes  two of my many weaknesses  so I highly recommend this to my friends and readers in need of TLC.
4583850
This is so good, the only thing that would be better is MORE!
724320
I wish we couldve seen their relationship develop more! This would be a great book to have a sequel, maybe from his perspective. I also wish we couldve learned more about the criminal case as it was going on. The idea was great, and I loved the writing, I just wanted more!
3857489
I enjoyed this story, but would have liked more.  There were 3 different plot lines that were interconnected, and while they tied together by the end I really felt like there could have been more depth to the stories.

The descriptions of the area and the historical places were well done, to the point where it added to my anticipation of an upcoming trip to France.  The people in the story did not seem as fleshed out to me which made it hard to get into the meat of the story.  I understand that some of the mystery surrounding characters and their motives was needed to keep the reader guessing as to the ending, but as the ending was not that huge of a shock it seems more could have been done to develop the characters.

The use of the diary kept me turning pages waiting for more from the young sister who had seen so much, but there was no really ending to her personal story to my disappointment.

The ending seemed to be a bit rushed to this reader.  The "confrontation" seemed too simple and the epilogue did nothing to really explain its aftermath beyond what we already knew.  If this is a set up to another France based history mystery for Dory to become involved in I enjoyed the author's style enough to give it a look.

There were some spacing errors between sections which were confusing, but those may be kindle formatting errors.  Otherwise there were no major editing issues that took away from the reading.
882972
Liked the book and the series, wish more were out.