Had good parts and bad parts.
359806
I got this book for my Kindle because it was free.  I liked the premise of it being "Dark Fantasy for Grown-ups Tired of YA" and that was me.  Quite a few of my favorite authors have gone by the wayside in pursuit of the young adult, "Twilight" audience.  I guess that's where the money is.  Don't they stop to think that "Older women" usually have more money than say twenty year olds.  But, I digress.  The book started out really strong, very suspenseful, unique and dark.  I liked the character of Evangeline, but I have to say that at one point it became too depressing to read.  She has few friends, a job she doesn't care that much about, and a mother in an insane asylum.  Around the part that I decided that it wasn't going to be anything but a depressing book, something weird would happen.  I kept reading and I must say that overall I enjoyed the book.  However, sometimes it didn't make sense what was happening, and what was happening?  What was she?  What was her mother?  Some things were never made clear.  Also, I normally don' comment about editing mistakes but his book was full of them.  It was constant disjointed random spelling and grammatical errors and it was unceasing.  Didn't anyone proof read this book?????  The mistakes were jolting.  The end had enough weirdness to keep me interested, but I'm not really certain what Evangeline is or her mother.  I never fully understood why at the end all of a sudden it became action and vampires appeared and other supernatural entities, but three quarters of the book, you really aren't sure what is going on.  However, the ending really made me want to read the next one, but if I have to pay for it, I doubt I would buy it.  Maybe I can get it from the library.  It was a unique story and I did like it because I finished it.  If I don't like a book, I'll put it down and not pick it back up.  It just needed a little cleaning up and more direction.
324537
Both stories needed  more editing and fleshing out. That being said, there are parts are parts that are extremely well written, that grab your attention.
586843
The story could be quite good if the main leads were not overthinking and complaining to heavens as much as they did. Also the last part was overextended quite unnecessary. And the misunderstandings were becoming stupid.
902117
It started out rough, ended rough, and had lots of good bits and bad bits in the middle. Overall a great read.
1041669
I liked the premised but there were too many details that could have been left out like the praying and the fighting.
627513
This started out really good and then became really bad. There were grammar errors, typos, and other errors that were distracting from the story and then it seemed like things were added in to make the story longer. Premise was interesting, execution was poor.
279356
The screen did not fit properly and had a few bright spots.
820182
A a bit of change was very good enjoyed it ended to soon to many parts got mixed up on the parts
1333132
overall design is pleasant and the design functions; however, some parts were badly manufactured and some rods were split. we made it work, but shouldn't have had to deal with those manufacturing issues.
4442209
Parts were very interesting, parts depressing (to see how things really work), parts more detail than I could keep track of.
62206
The beginning was good, but the second half was all preaching her ideals.
4731727
Some of the nuts were bad, and there were some shell bits. Don't know if there's any way around that though.
4056329
The plot was interesting but some of the main vehicles for setting up parts of the story seemed too contrived.
1957663
It was a good story but did have a few disturbing parts that had to be to make the story so good.
4775944
Not bad.  Some of the pieces didn't fit together very well and had a tendency to fall apart.
1221025
This story started well. It had a lot of potential, and it had an interesting, and unusual theme. But after a while I felt that it went in the wrong direction and took on way too much. Going after some law breakers would have made for a far stronger story than trying to tackle terrorists, let alone major terrorist planned assassinations.  Because of this the story lost all credibility, which is a shame because it could have, and should have been very good.
457425
Just ok. I thought it was pretty good until I was nearly done and it just spiraled into some things that
I couldn't quite piece together.