Would have liked to see more character development and back story in ...
345293
The story was okay but the plot was a little rushed and fairly far fetched even for the genre. Would have liked to see more character development and back story in the first book.
3051872
I enjoyed this story however I do have a few things to say.  I felt that the characters were underdeveloped.  I found that while the characters were expressive emotionally  I did not really empathize with them at all and that left me feeling a bit unsatisfied at the end of the story.  I felt that the story has potential but lacks the depth of a truly good story that leaves me wanting more.  Would I buy the sequel? Probably just to see if the characters get any better and to see where the story goes.  Would I recommend this to a friend?  Probably but not as one of my favorites.
1910228
I would have liked the story to go further. And a map of the states involved would have been nice.
1047273
There are some parts which I would like to read about more in details or rather story itself could be more developed around one of the major character dying or about actual battle between good and evil or .... Some plots or character behaviour seems to be there only to fit general story. Open ending suggest that there will be more of it with hopefully nice twist (assuming from last talk between Envy and A-O). Even thought I have some thing to point out I did not like in the book I loved the book (story) in general and I am waiting for follow-up in third book in the sequel.
260734
I would have liked if there had been a bit more depth to this story because the characters were great and more would have been satisfying. It would be so great to see this continue into a series. The movie should have stayed a little more true to Kyle and Lindy from the book. Lindy's character has imperfect teeth and is a shy redhead with nothing. Would love to see it more from Lindy's point of view. The movie was enjoyable but the book was infinitely better.
3941602
I would have loved for this book to have gone into more depth with some of the major characters in the story. Since the story is written as an explanation justifying the main character's actions, it somewhat limited what could be said about the other characters. The story was amazing and I was sad when it ended.
1483045
Definitely a step up from most romances as far as the writing is concerned, though there were a few cheesy lines here and there. The story line was solid and interesting read. However, sometimes situations seemed rushed (e.g. Rhona accepting Finn, etc.). I realize it was probably because these were novellas and thus had limited space, but I still would've liked to have seen more developed characters and situations.
802001
I enjoyed the book, but felt that the character development was somewhat lacking. In addition I felt that just when the story could have taken off it ended.  It was disappointing that the story and characters weren't developed further, I will try another of her books as I've really enjoyed others in the past.
4735345
too short and not enough - wishes there was more backstory and epilog type stories form the main characters.  but guess this will have to do.
281870
I really wanted more from the characters and a little more time exploring why Ashley and Zeke were so drawn together. I wanted to believe their connection but I didn't. Maybe a little more time spent on building it would have helped. I did like the secondary characters and I have a feeling this is going to be a great series that gives each one of them their time in the spotlight.

Overall it just didn't come out on top for me but it could work for others!
2251361
a novel concept, would have liked it more if the series continued
793164
I wish certain things had been revealed and explained much sooner. I know I would have enjoyed the story much more. It would have rounded out the plot and delved into the characters struggles and emotions a lot more. As it's written it feels...unfulfilled.
2992136
1st time reading from this author. I felt like she missed developing the characters.  The story flowed well but would have loved to see more in depth plot or writing to make you really get into the story
4181873
Wish it could've been a little better (less focus on throwing out so many characters and more development and storyline)
1868540
This book had great potential. I appreciate it's simplicity but was left wanting more. Four stars for the construction of the book etc but I was hoping for a more developed story line.
4411545
Just wanted more of the story to see what would happen next,  A little repetitive but still good, like the characters and development of  their personalities / relationships
2897553
The book held my interest, but I would have liked to see a better plot development with more background information.  I felt the story got bogged down with over done descriptions of the character's emotional states.