Really poor story line
351160
It seemed like some 1980's or even older sci-fi. Atleast the first season it not worth watching, you may spend time elsewhere...
1592060
I paged through about 40% of this book trying to find a story line. This was awful and I hope not indicative of future books.
769394
I really wanted to like this book.  The main plot line is so weak and the pace so slow that it relied on all the clever "ancillary" plot twists to make it bearable.  I'm 90% thought it now and will finish it but life is too short to read books that miss the mark,
714308
There were many spelling mistakes .  The main characters thought processes were illogical and repetitive. There was no connection between the two main characters . And there was no plot resolution. There was really no plot. This is the worst story I have read by this author. And there was only three love scenes, which were not even well done.
819760
The story was ok bordering on bad.....it jumped over too many cliffs for me, there was no build up or transition for things that were happening. Also some of the story line was pretty ridiculous, the murders and reason for the murders or suicides were hmmmmmmm....mediocre at best. The fights were crazy and the conversations were confusing. The fact that a 2 hour investigation to man that your sister is married to and has kids by is crazy to perform after 5 years and the fact that you would look at your parents belongings like 7 years after they are dead is just hmmmmm... again mediocre at best. The descriptions of the characters and there motivations were almost non existent.
3020949
This book was hugely disappointing. Not well researched as to even the most remote geography of the area. Disjointed story lines. Poor quality writing. Tried and tried to finish it.  The story was implausible at best. Hard to follow and totally unbelievable.  Would love to get the time back I spent reading it.
3450286
Poorly written book. The plot line started off pretty good but then it got into 'oh this person did it' 'no wait this person did!' 'No wait it was this other person'. I didn't even finish it because I got so sick of it.
4231165
The story line isn't very believable and the writing is poor. I think he's just cranking out books to fatten his bank account.
2587011
Not recommended. Very poor premise to the story line. If you  believe is ghosts and spirits to even consider, you may consider this.
3914622
I regret to say that I paid for this book. The first 1/3 of the story was sooo boring that I skimmed it.  The entire story was so full of typos, wrong use of words, even in the same paragraph (alter and altar when discussing aversion to marriage),  and incorrect punctuation.  The worse mistake was when a friend delivers her baby girl at the heroine's home and two pages later,  it is described as a boy child. Agree with another reader/reviewer that this book "screams" for proofreading.  However, I also feel that this plot line is weak and unbelievable.
1476060
If I could rate this a ZERO I would, but since that is not an option, I had to select 1 star in order to leave my comments/review.  After about 100 pages into the book, the story line was still the same and was going NO WHERE.  I eventually stopped reading because the book was going no where - and I never stop reading books, but this was so bad I could not finish it.
3359107
Honestly, I was diasapointed with it.  This could have been done so much better. The plot line was extremely weak!
1327785
Ugh!! What a ridiculous story line.  I kept waiting for something, anything, to happen - and once it finally does, of course it ends.  I ended up skipping some pages just to get to the point.  I would NOT recommend this book, and I will not be reading the next one.
1380842
What could be a good story is told very poorly. There is very little action,  almost no dialogue,  & zero character development.  It is written in a passive way. When the main character  meets  a person after several weeks of not seeing anyone  he doesn't even ask obvious questions like "what happened" or "how did you survive?" Why did he drive from California to New York only to turn around and drive right back? It's as if the writer never experienced or researched anything,  & wrote this as a child might imagine the way things work. I couldn't even finish the book.
3302450
This was probably one of the worst books I have ever read. Poor story line, went nowhere, and I felt like a child wrote it.
2976988
Weak story,poor English.  Would not read another book by this author.
3316793
Rather incomplete plot lines, far-fetched events and simplistic, inaccurate vocabulary. The clincher was calling an Iris Recognition scanner an eyeball scanner! There was a scene where the author kept contradicting herself, actually there were a couple scenes like that. As someone else said, there were so many opportunities missed to expand on the story line and really increase the intrigue and mystery. The characters were just so so and I had a hard time finishing this book. It is actually quite a mess of a book. Don't bother getting it.