Excellent writing flow and good plot
349514
Excellent writing flow and good plot.  "Another" zombie novel, but a few nifty ideas and some very tightly written human interaction.  How the characters act and relate to each other definitely drives this work!  Not too long, but long enough to be worth the $$$.  I've already added the remaining books in the series to my list and will be picking them up as time permits.
3420306
Excellent read. An interesting and plausable plot, well crafted, well written and we'll edited. Too often with e-books from new writers you are distracTed by the technical flaws in the writing (i.e., misspellings,  poor punctution, etc. )
243256
This is my second book by this author and once again the writing is very good and draws you in to whatever story is being told. He always writes wonderful characters too. They all have their own voice and flaws. The plot is something has been done many times before but even so it was done well. This was definitely an addicting read. But if I had to find a flaw I would say the Adam and Eve retelling part didn't feel so much like a retelling. But it had some elements of one. I liked Seth and Cains characters a lot and I would like a bit more of them. Maybe another story of them on their new planet.
Over all this was a great read and I look forward to reading more from this author. The writing just flows really well and is very easy to read and get lost in. I definitely recommend this.
628490
This book has a terrific plot with well drawn, very human, characters and an all-too believable sequence of events in this chaotic world. I highly recommend it and look forward to the author's next book.
2910056
Intertesting and well crafted plot, moves along at a good pace
2726444
Good writing, very clever plot, good dialog.  My 2nd book by this author - Will read more!  He doesn't just rewrite the same story with different names.
623451
Excellent plot development with plenty of twists and turns. My reading habits are "recreational" and this fit the bill quite well.
435580
The writing is tight and so well done. I look forward to the next book in this page turning series.
493706
Well written, good plot and storyline, flows well, keeps reader turning pages, characters well developed, and I  will recommend to friends!
469539
I read about four books a week and this one was a page-turner.  The plot was well developed and the characters were people you cared about.  I really like how this guy writes and I can't believe this was his first book. I usually spot poor grammar or common writing mistakes but I found nary a one anywhere.  This author can sign me up for life.
4817303
Well rounded and fleshed out characters and a thought through sorcerer true to what makes them what they are. Interesting plot that flows nicely and kept my interest throughout the book.  Well written with only a few minor editing issues that don't distract from the enjoyment of the read. Worthwhile purchase.
367488
I love good writing!  Oh there's a lot of sex, too...but we know what these books are about and it's much better when the story has a unique plot, decent characters and obvious use of an editor.  I have read several of her books now under both pen names - haven't been disappointed yet.
963939
I really enjoyed this book, well-written and well-developed characters. In fact the story and writing were good enough to make me over look a personal pet-peeve that pops up early in the story (which is pretty impressive, most often I'll quit the book, I'm not patient that way).

What I really like is the way the author balances fun characters with good relationships. The relationships don't become angsty or annoying or worse cringe-worthy.

Really looking forward to more from the author.
4416793
I had not heard of this writer before and although others were critical of his writing style, I loved it.  It was so wonderfully easy to follow the flow of the story.  I felt like I was sitting across from him listening to him tell the tale.  Perhaps it is partly because I, too, am retired and understand the desire for a quiet meditative existence after living a busy life.  From the finding of the body on the beach through the ramifications of bringing the past to the present I enjoyed all the plot lines.  His description of the Oregon coast and its sometimes blustery weather is easily  followed and felt. The awful ending was well described without getting overly descriptive as so many writers do these days. I was glad to see the possibility of a continued story in another novel which I am now devouring.  I am happy that his main character has found a new love.  If you enjoy a smooth flowing read you will enjoy this book.
3280297
I really like this authors style and flow. The books works as a stand-alone but also as a series which is an extremely nice touch. The story pulls you in and makes it a hard book to put down.
3469542
Toni is an excellent author with a pleasant writing style. I read the first book in this series, but happy to report you don't have to read the first one to get this one. But having read the first one it is nice to see how the characters from the first one continued on. The pace is important to me and is spot on. It has a natural flow to it that keeps you reading.

I really enjoyed Robert in this story. He is a strong character who is more worried about others than himself. I find Kyrissa matches up with him well. They play well of each other. I also really enjoyed the addition of Mama T and having Lucien and Mandy back in this part.

The plot is well developed and has some twists you don't see coming, and some where your gut feeling is telling you there is something more going on here.

All in all I really enjoyed this book and  enjoyed reading it.

I have received this book from the author for an honest review.
4208452
The writing and pacing were really good in this book.  I enjoyed the way the pieces were unveiled and felt that the author understood the need for the readers to understand the characters before moving too quickly from scene to scene.  There was a little bit of a disconnect for me in that there were two parallel story lines.  The one story line, the death of the brother and sister-in-law was very well conveyed.  The second story line which involved an environmental element, was a bit choppy for me and seemed more forced.  I lost track of how the two stories were connected a couple of times but the story was interesting enough to keep me reading.

Even with the slight disconnect this is well worth the read.  I very much recommend it and have already ordered another book by this author.