An Excellent Short Novella
358557
I loved getting a first look at a character that has been in the background of the main books, and is really the driving force for everything that happens, especially in regards to Tamas. The viewpoint character in this story is Erika ja Leora, Field Marshall Tamas' future wife and the mother of Taniel Two-Shot. The story takes place in Kez, and features a young Erika and her mentor/guard. Erika is a Powder Mage, and in Kez this would usually mean death or imprisonment, but because of her nobility, she is allowed to be free but is forsworn to interact with black powder. Her life is changed forever when she finds and decides to save a runaway Powder Mage that is being hunted by Kez Longdogs. We also get to see a young Duke Nikslaus, who is a main villain in the books, and in this story is leading the search for the escaped Powder Mage. This was a great novella, especially for fans of the books, though I'm sure it would also good intro to the author's work.
2423538
There is much to adore about this novella and I did. I really like the heroine. She is so very much herself and it is wonderful. The hero is steadfast and sweet.

The writer has a great engrossing voice. The setting in Los Angeles is well done. The issue of weight are handled in a body positive and the hero loves the heroines curves even as her trainer.

The best friend situation is interesting and the start of a BDSM relationship is sexy and integrated here.

However, the novella is just too short to be full book joy of me. I would have liked to see this through to  meeting of families and living together, I just wanted more time with them to really be satisfied.

But I was delighted overall.
576496
THIS WAS A HIGHLY ENTERTAINING, AMUSING, AND TOUCHING NOVELLA COMBINING THE ELEMENTS OF DANGER FROM A CRIME STORY TO THOSE OF A DOG STORY PLUS ADDING A TOUCH OF ROMANCE WHILE ENDING WITH A HINT OF EERINESS WHEN IT WAS REVEALED THAT MOSEY WAS A GHOST. THIS IS A GOOD NOVELLA TO GO ALONG WITH THE BOOKS THAT DALE HAS WRITTEN. I HOPE SHE WRITES MORE IN ADDITION TO BOOKS IN HER OTHER SERIES.
510325
After a short break from m/m fiction to read other things, I dove back in with this offering. It was free and sounded intriguing so I figured I'd give it a try. I was not disappointed. In fact, I was very pleased. The writing is tight and well done and the characters are very likable.  Though it took a while for them to get together, that was part of the fun of reading this delightful short story.  I could picture it all quite well and I was hoping that Jay and Devin would finally get it together. As this short story ends, we see an HEA looming brightly in their future.

I'd love a sequel!
1207127
This novella is short but intense. I really enjoyed the winter search and rescue and diving backdrop. The characters are likable and have witty rapport and chemistry.  Derek and Artemis find themselves in a precarious rescue situation and being in close contact rekindles old feelings. We also meet other team members including the couple that will be featured in the first full length book Hold Your Breath. I am looking forward to more in this series and uncovering more about another story brewing in the background.
128712
I really enjoyed this story.  I read it over two coffees in a single sitting.  The things I liked are: tight prose with no obvious (glaring) spelling or grammar errors; likeable main characters that are developed sufficiently for a short story; how at the end, history and mythology are combined; and, although this story ends the possibility of a sequel is left open.

I would have liked the story to be longer and there were enough concepts and depth for this to be a novel.  Highly recommended.
655033
Card crafts another captivating story in this short novella. The characters are compelling and Card continues to show great insight into human relationships. This book is a quick read that will take no more than an afternoon or two.
888187
I thoroughly enjoyed this Regency novella! This is part of the Half Moon House series, and my first visit with this series. This made a fine standalone read, although it makes me want to enjoy more Half Moon House books.

One of the things that made this such an excellent read was that even though this is novella length, the story felt complete and satisfying. There were several elements that I especially enjoy, including some references to friendly castle ghosts, some potential danger and intrigue, a pretend to real love, and a plucky heroine to cheer for. I also liked the matchmaking Duke of Danby. I recommend this for anyone looking for a great romantic novella that takes place during the Regency era, or for anyone who is curious for a taste of the Half Moon House series.
4248745
This is a great novella. It touches everything you want in a book. Romance, mystery, suspense and drama. My only complaint was I wish it was a few hundred pages longer.
2195013
I enjoyed this quick read. Sometimes it's fun to be able to finish a book /novella in one day. All the cases including the podcasts were intriguing. My only complaint would be I wanted more, meaning I wanted a novel's worth of this. Lisa, the main character, solved everything too easily and fast. I wanted more of the romance, too. Maybe I'm being greedy. I am looking forward to Laurie Fagen's next full size book so I can enjoy more of all the good stuff she tantalize us with in this novella.
271395
I've had this short story ever since it got published in late 2011. And now I finally read it :) And yeah, it was a whole lot shorter than I had thought. Although this ebook is more than one hundred pages, that's just because it's several chapters of Wither. Which is kind of awesome, if you don't have the book. There's also a preview of Fever, which is kind of cool. But then there is the real short story, which is only a few pages long.

The First Bride is a short story told from the point of view of Rose, Linden's first wife. We don't get that much from her. But I loved a look into her mind, even if it was at such a depressing time. We get to know some things about her before she dies. Before she get Linden to get new brides. Oh. It's depressing, because she's so sick, and all she wanted was to die in her garden. But Linden won't let her. He just don't want her to die. And I get that, but I wanted her to be able to choose for herself; not to be more tortured by Vaughn and his medicines. Sigh.

But anyway. I loved reading this from Rose's point of view. And while I don't really like Linden, I can understand why she loves him. He's kind of pathetic, and he knows nothing about his dad, but he's also kind of sweet. And he does need some protection. But yeah. I don't like him much, still. But this short story is five stars, because Rose is an amazing character. If you have read Wither, then you really should read this short story, because it is pretty amazing :) Go buy it.
3497534
A short book, which is not surprising as it is a novella, but packed with interesting things.  I wish it were longer!
2380887
Excellent story, a short, quick read that fits right in with Lewrie's established character -- a nice addition to the series!
3189843
I really enjoyed this short story. And recommend it to any fans of "Master of Crows"
429614
At 16 pages this is short even for a Kindle stand-alone.

  It is vaguely steampunk, with a touch of mystery and horror. When you consider that the author introduces two protagonists, a mystery, a tour of the clock tower, a couple of suspects and a satisfying ending, you appreciate how much has been packed into this tight and tidy package.

  The writing probably won't blow you away, (I mean, it's shorter than Proust's description of the cool underside of his pillow), but this is a solid entertaining effort, certainly worth a quick read. Enjoy.
2005049
I LOVED this little book.  It really is a novella.  I enjoyed the characters so much that when the book ended, I was left wanting to know more about what happens next in their lives.
I don't want to give anything away, so trust Celia Caputi's ability to write a story that is well worth the read.
1960004
This is the prequel to Clipped Wings, it gives you a little insight into Tenley and Hayden before their story kicks off in full swing during Clipped Wings.

You don't get much in the way of their pasts, but you do see all the signs that these two have had a lot to deal with. Things that have isolated them from really living. Tenley finds herself fascinated with the tattoo artist who works in the shop across from her apartment. But Hayden suddenly finds himself looking to run into this stranger more and more. Her working in the shop his aunt owns just across the street from his allows him perfect access to her.

This was a great short read and it left you with so many questions about both characters. This is the perfect little novella that will leave the readers dying to sort out what ghost lurk in their past and what is going to come of this strange new fascination they have with one another.

This is however, a very short introduction into this series, so I recommend that if you get this to be prepared to start the first full length story immediately. I know I will be cracking that one next. As for the overall feel of the story, it's hard to say for certain because of the length. I do know that I enjoyed it enough to want to read more and the set up for the next book was done nicely. I have no idea what to expect in the next book but this one got me excited to jump right in.