I enjoyed the writing and the story
343816
Had a lot of places in the story that made me smile. I enjoyed the writing and the story
3717783
I liked the story and the writing style. I looked at the other reviews particularly the ones of 1 star saying scam. This had me confused. Although I enjoyed the book and character, I would not buy another as I felt I had just read half of the story and would have to pay to read the rest. I am not sure why with a good story to tell the author has chosen to go this route except to sell more books. He lost me.
3349194
Very imaginative story! I enjoyed the writing and the characters very much!
4058655
I believe that this was quite a good story.  Maybe stories with this general plot exist elsewhere.  I am new to reading erotica, and this is the first time that I have read this particular type of story.
I think that the author's writing is quite good.  It is a good idea for a story, the plot is very well handled, and the characters were interesting.  There was even a bit of development of the characters.
I liked the author's writing enough that I am going to look for other stories written by her.
I thought that the sex was handled quite well.
2841142
I thought this was an entertaining story. The writing wasn't too bad either.
2204936
To me good writing is when you enjoy being there...in the book, with the characters if not all of the situations. I enjoyed this book and nothing broke the mood the author set.
1779948
I enjoyed the story, though it was a bit short. I would like to read some more of this writer's  stories, though hopefully the slang will be more understandable. I know what he was trying to represent, and I applaud him for that, but some of us are not as use to the continued use of slang. I had to read some sentences several times to understand what was being implied. Once I understood, the story had a wonderful twist.
4919929
The writing, though some reviewers have called pompous and a drag, is actually, in my opinion, capturing and fun.  The story is enticing and the pathos in the writing is very effective.  Throughout, the author details what the character sees well enough that the reader can be immersed.  I would like it if there were a sequel, but I am more pleased with the ending of this story than for most stories.
1875357
I enjoyed the characters and the story. I felt like I was living this with them. It was well written.
3269352
It was a well-written story, not filled with the grammatical and careless errors so many of this genre suffer from. The story, as others have said, was sweet, but not particularly consuming.  Short as it is, I was able to put it aside before finishing it, which is not often the case for me with my favorites, a benefit of being retired and believing dust keeps the patina of my furniture from hurting my eyes. I certainly would encourage this author to continue to write and to write, working on her plots, for this story was creative, not run-of-the-mill. I can easily envision her abilities taking her to the list of the best Pride and Prejudice writers, the only segment of romance stories I read,. . .well, aside from the Twilight Saga.
1947496
An interesting story, quite "off beat", in that I don't remember an exploration-type story told from a non-military viewpoint. The story is quite interesting. The author's writing style, working, and grammar make it very easy to read. Which makes it more enjoyable for me since my eyes will "glitch" if they detect misspellings or poor grammar. The writing is so good, that I'm going to buy the entire series, hoping that it continues to be excellent.
3700475
Wonderful discriptive writing.  It takes a bit to get use to the author's syntax and punctuation peculiarities, but once you get over that, it is rather fun and refreshing.  This work does have it's own rhythm and I rather like that.  I like the way the author has take very "ordinary" people, and told a story, proving again, that there is merit and a tale in every life.  I suppose many may be a bit put off as the the fact that the characters are not all that different from you and me, but that is one of the strong point of the work, I feel.  I could not find one character in the book, that I have not meet in "real life" and that was kind of nice.  I highly recommend this read and hope we get more of the same.
3331611
I enjoyed the story.  This writer has promise.  It would have helped if the author had used the services of an editor or proofreader.  There were areas that could have been restructured to the benefit of the story.  I enjoyed the strong characterizations and depth.  Keep writing!  This was a really good story line.
3365956
I enjoyed the writing.  While sometimes the characters quirks annoy me, I enjoyed them, made them more believable. All in all, I liked the story and the plot kept me guessing.
4351180
I almost didn't get past the first few chapters. There were about four chapters that were nothing more than character introductions, with no real story progression and little if anything to tie them together yet.
After getting past this point however, WOW! I just enjoy the story and the writing, I found myself getting frustrated when I had to stop for those pesky things like working, sleeping, or taking care of my son.
This book was really well written, the characters had fantastic personalities, and there was just enough suspense and mystery to make you want to keep reading till the end. Would definitely recommend this one, with the suggestion of just skimming the first few chapters.
793847
I enjoyed the writing and the characters, but not so much the ending. The writer is frist class but then everybody knows that.
3053124
I enjoyed the characters and plot. I did predict the ending but still read on, as the writing mad story telling is well done.