WAITING for a completion or continuation of story
344337
Great story but wish author would complete it...wouldn't have begun reading it if I was aware the author was dragging his feet to complete it.
3102816
Still waiting on the actual comic. This however is a nice concept for a story.
4013146
I enjoy the story and the read, but hated where it left you hanging and that you had to get the next book and the next to learn the whole story! I want to know it all in one book and would sit for hours if it meant learning how it ends!
3895604
All good. This is cliff hanger though.
Wanted more story than was present here.
Always good for more reading I'm sure!
3608123
Story was well put together and fun. Problem is that too much was left unfinished for my satisfaction. A quick easy read.
4330057
Uh . . . the book ends before the story is finished. I was looking forward to having some plot lines wrapped up, not necessarily in an obvious way. But it just seems to end abruptly. Other than that, great characters, good story development. And then it just
1884779
I liked the story line which moved along at a good pace but having to keep up with some obscure names for some of the items (a social rank of "Clarity" for example) made some of the reading a bit frustrating. It was only when I finished reading did I discover that there is a glossary at the end which defines these items. There was a sense of suspense that built throughout the book until the last page where the story just stopped.

The book has no ending, it just stops. I assume that there is going to be another book which will continue the story. Even so, there could have been an ending. Instead I am left hanging wondering what happens next, if anything.

I was educated that any good book must have an ending that evokes a strong emotion. The only emotions I felt were shock and disappointment at the total lack of an ending.
1366725
I wish I had waited until the series was complete before I read it, now I'm feeling impatient for the next volume
1402367
Great continued storyline, but too short.  Leaves the reader hanging waiting for the next chapter
3369669
It was good but just a continuation of first story.  In fact, you almost have to by the second one.  Same is true for the ending on this book - you are left hanging with the sudden ending.  I enjoy books that keep same characters in them, just don't like when you feel pressured to buy the next sequel to continue story.
2999998
This book was fun to read. I'm looking forward to the release of next step in the story. Waiting is always the hard part
435078
The novel was a good story, but left the reader hanging at the end. Must be additional books in the series.
3913678
I would easily give this book.five stars, BUT, it ends during a very awkward situation with a to be continued.  The sequel was supposed to be releases in May of 2015 and is still not out in September 2015,  I'm unable to find any info on the release and I am extremely frustrated.  There's nothing like getting 200 pages in to a great story only to be left hanging.  There was no resolution whatsoever.  Normally books in a series come to a natural conclusion and pick up at a logical starting point in the following volume.  Not this one... I really hope whoever is responsible for the delay gets their act together and gets this book out there.
1473288
Why didn't you finish the whole story. Is there another sequel to this book. Too good to leave us hanging.
2294369
Where is the rest of the story!!!!!!!!!!! I am going to have to make sure that this gets finished s o I will do it my self.
1915552
A well-written story which holds the reader's interest until the end.  The problem is the abruptness of that end.  While not inappropriate, it just happens - leaving one with an unfulfilled feeling.
2944722
I can't stand it when a "series story" is not finished.  Don't publish some until you've completed the series.  How long does one wait for the completion of the story and how is one to know when the next one is available.  The editing on many of these books that are put out by Amazon leaves a lot to be desired.  Do the editors actually read the stories or do they just "skim" them for errors.