The story line was a bit disjointed and a little ...
599537
The story line was a bit disjointed and a little hasrd to follow, especially the short stories.
The books were a little easier to follow. I probably will not read any more of this author's books.
4253127
Very interesting story, but the film was somewhat disjointed and difficult to follow.
4046810
The story line was scattered a bit. Not difficult to keep up with but it didn't flow very well in the beginning. The further you read it does get much better. Not a terrible read. I was expecting more from it though.
2854391
It was interesting , but I was disapointed in the story line. I felt it was a bit disjointed.
872076
I found the story line a bit drawn out, and it was very predictable, not as gripping as I thought it would be
2507657
The story was a bit long and convoluted. The premise of the story was good, but the execution was lacking. Maybe something was lost in translation.
2969809
I made myself finish this book. I would have enjoyed the story more but felt it was disjointed. I am giving it three stars for the story alone. Not for the writing. It could seriously use editing and some grammar work.
2030054
I have enjoyed the first two in this trilogy better than this one.  Thought it was somewhat disjointed and contrived.
1441168
It was an interesting premise but I found it challenging to keep the multiple time lines in order. Problems in one and solved in another got a bit convoluted and I was never sure I had all the information.
4722393
This series may smooth out as it progresses, but I felt the story moved along in fits and starts and was slightly disjointed.  I've read the "Lost Girl" series and have enjoyed it, but didn't love this one as much.
1073050
It was a little slow in places and and sometimes crude in ways that did not add to the story or plot.
3120942
A bit disjointed, sometimes felt like they were a series of short stories cobbled together and the endings were a bit abrupt but were an enjoyable read.
1732358
A little disjointed, with some inconsequential elements that created blind alleys. Overall an interesting read, but an amateur effort.
1129107
Enjoyed the book but at times it was hard to follow all the different story lines and how they blended together.
2016119
For me the story lagged a little bit in the middle. However, the intrigue and the twists and turns of the plot lines at the end of the book more than make up for the middle of the book.
3517140
For the first book of the series, it was a bit disjointed and the character development was a bit haphazard, however it was an enjoyable read and I have download the next couple of books in the series.
2254911
It was good; however it wasn't the best permis for a storyline. It was a little hard to follow at times