Could of easily been longer
580413
I guess not bad for a first attempt. I did enjoy it. The ending seemed rushed. It was unique being from a womans point of view. This is going to sound sexest but, I could tell it was a woman because of the lack of knowledge about cars and motorcycles. A Harley Davidson Road King weighs over 650lbs. easy. Clean out an airfilter from a car/truck and it will run again. (Just like the motorcycle)
2249097
Well written with an interesting story line but could have been a little longer-If I hadn't had the next part waiting in my Kindle, I would have been irritated.
1592231
I received a free copy of this story in exchange for an honest review.

I have read Canis Blackfang's other story's. This book was enjoyable as a short read. I would have liked it to be a lot longer. There are so much that could have been developed more as well as it there are flow issues. The characters of  Gerrad and Derek were really developing well and then it skips to the end. Compared to previous story's of this authors I have read, it felt rushed. It still is a good story, with potential to be so much better. I will continue to look forward to each release from the author of a dedicated fan.
1571454
Short and to the point. Could have been much longer but its okay for a quick read... say 30 minutes.....
4464090
wish it didn't end so quickly, it would have been a very interesting read had it been a longer book.
1340610
This is one of those books that I could have stopped reading several times. It was interesting enough that I finished it. It could have easily been several chapters shorter.
107983
I would have liked a little longer of a book but it was pretty good and well written.  I liked the heroine a lot but the hero could have been fleshed out a bit more.
3215247
I would have liked this book better if it had been longer and maybe left out some of the personal life of the main character.  I enjoyed it but felt it could have included more about the subject matter than about the kids, etc.
272807
Good read. Could have been longer. Left you thinking there should have been more to the story. Concept is great. Author should have been more in depth. Had the potential to be a really really good book but the author got lazy.
604429
Loved the story, too short though.  Wish it had continued.
1536938
Complex who done it. Good but could have been shorter.
4436447
Too long.  Story could have been conveyed in 2 hours.
1000584
Would've given it five stars if it had been longer, not necessarily more torture though I found the the LIPS part clever. Up there with Matt Shaw just a tad more fleshing out of the characters (pun intended) n it definitely would've been a five star.
1162647
COULD HAVE HAD MORE OF A STORY TO IT.. To easily figure out not enough of STORY...Was interesting though. Liked
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2897080
I appreciate the fact Amazon discloses the fact this title is less than 100 pages however I would have gladly paid more for a longer read. I did find the subject interesting and would have liked more.
2880894
This book is worth a read, but it seemed very long to me.  I think it would have been a much better book if the author had shortened it by a third.
1376418
Solid story from John C Wright, I felt the brevity of the format hurt the development of the story. A longer form would have given him more time to flesh out the past experiences of the protagonist, Tommy.  I would have easily read it in novel form.