The True Piru!!! Thewriterchick is BADDD!!!
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I loved the journey you are sending Ms Cones on. She is true to her friends and deadly to her enemies. It was a page turner and I hated to see it end. Bring Ms Cones back she has some unfinished business to settle in Deadly Decisions 3. Don't leave me waiting too long! Once again you have a wicked pen that you keep putting to pad. Keep it up!
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the book is a rollercoaster ride of pure greatness...from the raunchy and rude 2 plain wacky and out of your mind crazy!!!!
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I rarely take time to write a review.  Mostly, I get so fed up with a novel and how awful it was even though most of the ratings were 5's.  Since the reviews were so wonderful, except for a select few, I would buy the book.  If the book ended up being so ridiculous and unreal, that I spent my money on it and can't even finish, then I just felt compelled to at least support those few 1's and 2 ratings with some back up so that another buyer will not be suckered in!

THIS BOOK SO SURPRISED MY EXPECTATIONS!  There wasn't a single 1 or 2 rating so I thought hm, I'll give it a try.  Boy was I glad I took a chance. Loved how the author built up there relationship to a believable level.  And can we say steamy!  My poor husband was sleeping next to me oblivious that I was doing a marathon reading session to finish before daylight.  At moments while reading some yummy parts I thought maybe I might just wake him.....then...nah...wanted to finish!

Great job to the author - more please!!

additional comments:

Loved this authors writing style so much that I am obsessed with her new release supposedly coming out today! A Negotiated Marriage Is it truly being released today (1-11-13)!!?? There is another wonderful author I discovered, Callihan, Kristen - Firelight (Darkest London), where I am hovering over the "buy now with one click" button for the sequel. But, I just can't do it till I see if this one is going to be released today.....
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It's filthy, disgusting, stupid, and just plain WRONG!!!!

I LOVED IT!!!!!

Keep up the good work!!!!
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First let me say.... Kudos to you for going against the grain- once again! I love that you did not end this book in a traditional HEA!!
Secondly, as a writer, you make by brain hurt( In a good way lol)!! Just when I think I've seen creativity at its finest... You write this!!!
And lastly, ironically, you mentioned Stephen King in your acknowledgment...almost from the beginning of this book, I thought of SK's style. Of course, you're not nearly as twisted ;) but, if you were his relative- you would be a cousin, thrice removed:).
Well done! Keep writing! You have an amazing talent and I think you've only scraped the tip!
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THESE 2 AUTHORS ALONG WITH A FEW MORE TO ME THAT CAN DO NO WRONG IN WRITING, I LUV THEIR STYLES AS PRINTED BEFORE TOGETHER OR APART,I'M A FAN FOR LIFE!!!SO DO YOURSELF A FAVOR GET DA BOOK MAANN!!!!I HAVE TO GIVE THIS OTHER AUTHOR HER PROPS(AYANA ELLIS), ALTHOUGH I'M NOT REALLY FAMILIAR WITH HER WORK, SHE BROUGHT IT, AND SHE DID DA DAMN THANG!!! SHE WAS AMONG 2 VERY TALENTED AUTHORS ,AND SHE HELD HER OWN!!!! I WILL DEFINITELY BE CHECKING FOR HER IN DA FUTURE!!! OH AND I'M ANXIOUSLY AWAITING THE SEQUELS TO BOTH OF THE 1ST 2 STORIES!!!!! SIMPLY FIYAH!!!!
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I decided to write this review as I go along because I had too much to get off my chest!! OMG the first 70% of this book was terrible!! I don't understand Amanda at all, I couldn't relate to her way if thinking and I swear I just wanted to punch her! I still don't understand what her problem was! i know girls are hesitant if the guy is a player or has been, if she doesn't realise she loves him, if he's secretive or mysterious and shedoesnt quiet trust him or if she only just met him but this couple did not fall into any of these categories! The only thing that made me keep reading was Noah! He was honest, caring, sweet and straight forward! He didn't play games with her and was always open on where he stood and how he felt. I couldn't stand her reactions to him when he did something, all she had to do was say the word and she could've had him. Her excuse was that she didn't want to lose him but she lost him various times over and over!! I just don't get it!!

OMG then what she did listening to that Brooke after what happened with his Dad, she is nothing but a stupid, nasty, immature girl! I seriously don't think I've disliked another character more!! After that scene my review went from 3 stars to 2!!!! THEN THEN THEN she goes back to Brad! SERIOUSLY?? After what he did to her? OMG I have no respect for this girl and honestly not sure if I can keep reading!!

So I kept reading and it only gets worse! Now she has left for college and entered into an emotionally abusive relationship!! I am so disappointed with this story and want to throw my Kindle in Amanda's face and throw my arms around Noah's neck! Amanda has got one thing right, she definitely does not deserve him!!

Ok so we haven't even dealt with the first drama and now there's more way unnecessary drama! Why can't I put this book down? I am so frustrated but can't stop reading! Is that a sign of good writing? If it is then the writing is great!!

Great now I'm crying! I done get that for being such great friends they don't actually talk about anything or communicate about anything important going on!!

So finally at 90% we get what we have waited so long for and it is a complete let down! No sweet words spoken, no big gestures of love, after all that back and forth no good feeling scene!! Ughhhhh

Well that lasted for 2 seconds before we get more bad news, more depressing storyline!! Seriously if I wanted to hear a story so sad I'd watch the daily news!!

Well finally there is some reprieve with the epilogue! If it ended any different I think I would've definitely be in need of a new Kindle!! Thank goodness thank goodness thank goodness, LOVED the epilogue!!

I am giving two stars because in spite if the terrible story the writing was really good and Noah was so perfect it made up for a lot!!

I'm not sure if I'll read brads story, the authors writing is good so I wouldn't rule it out, and at least it won't be the same painful story! I might give it a go!
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Again I DON'T KNOW WHAT EVERYONE ELSE WAS READING!!!!!!! Honestly this book... it just.... WHY?! Who writes stories like this? I don't bash authors and this isn't personal at all (well as non-personal as you can get when you're talking about someone's writing and thoughts) but Lisa ... WHAT ON EARTH WERE YOU THINKING? I'm literally shocked. I cannot believe Sterling.... I mean.... Asher.... I mean... Tanner.... I mean Jamison... I mean Daniel...... UGH WHATEVER. I can't believe he did that. WHy would ANYONE do that? I mean if you factor in his dad leaving him you can kind of chalk it up to some "daddy issues" or some type of mental illness but honestly if he would have been diagnosed with schizophrenia I would have been a little more placated. But the fact that EVERYONE is acting as if this is normal and ok has me mind boggled.

My last HUGE problem with this story was Becca. BECCA WHYYYYYY?! I understand the whole bestfriend in love blah blah blah. But if he was a man-whore I would have been ok with it, I've read PLENTY of those. But seriously? No matter HOW this guy (I refuse to even try to call him a name because its useless) puts it his junk isn't taken off each time and placed on the bodies of his multiple personalities... He cheated on Skye, then cheated on Lilly with Skye, then cheated on Skye and Lilly with Adlee, then cheated on all three of them with each of them (if that makes sense). And Becca "married" him. And how can you love a man that abandoned his children like that. I don't care that they have financial stability or that they have a father figure in their life. Their biological father is NOT dead and he has an obligation to be there.

This story was RIDICULOUS. And after reading the sample and then going threw the reviews as I was sitting there thinking what might link them.... it came to me but I jus couldn't believe it. I couldn't believe that an author would seriously write something like this. When I'm reading a book I am simultaneously putting myself in the shoes of the heroine. And if I was these three women pissed isn't the word. Thankfully they don't know the truth because if the did... well you know what they say "Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned."

I have one last request and question for all those who thought that this book was God's gift to book junkies, that this book was like Heaven on Earth, and who doesn't plan on archiving it on their kindle and pretending that they NEVER read it (which is what I plan on doing).... Now here goes that request and question:
Put yourself in the shoes of these three women... and change the story a bit... let's say you know what he did to you and other woman... say you know the WHOLE story... Would you have thought that it was such a great story still?

Thank you that is all.

Oh and I didn't have a choice but to give it a star... if i could give it negative infinity stars (immature I know but I don't care) I would
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Although Sexual harassment and intimidation have been outlawed in the US for many years now -that does not mean to say it does not still exist and happen!! To say that I was literally spitting nails at what was being depicted is well frankly an understatement!! Unless you have been harassed to leave a job or had a co-worker make sexual overtures (which I sincerely hope never happens to you) you are going to be shocked. This is, after all, just a novel--but an extremely well written one which will have you gasping, and admittedly even laughing a bit.

Other then Toni Day, a die hard pessimist whose character I ended up loving and admiring and who seemed to be constantly opening her mouth, getting in more and more trouble or ending up in a hospital bed herself--her mother, who had come for a visit was a bit of a comic relief. I mean really, as the entire world is going crazy and you finally say some words that maybe you shouldn't--there is good old Mom reminding you about your language! I also loved all the ancillary characters from the hospital staff. I have worked in hospitals and yes, they are hot beds of gossip. Toni's husband when up to his earlobes would throw his hands up in the air and scream out Oy Gevault--

Now that I have read this novel I can not wait to read others in the Toni Day Mystery series--I give this a 5 star rating and suggest you go get a copy for yourself (e-book or paperback)!!!!!
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FANTABULOUS!!  I loved it!! You can WRITE!!
Wow!! This book took me all over the place with the Emotional Gambit!!!  LOL!!
You are Blessed, Woman!! Can You Write!!
You Go Girl!!
WooHoo!! ;-)
Ivette Torres LOL!! :)
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BEST CREEPER BOOK EVER WRITTEN IN THE UNIVERSE!!!!!!!
i am not kidding !
nope not one bit!
yes i am sure! suler duper sure
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I love your writing and all your books ! You and cube kid are the best minecraft writers I know! I think you should continue diary of an angry Alex , power hungry sheep, rebellious villager and diary of a hungry ocelot. Your writing is absolutely wonderful and I suggest this and all crafty Nichole's books to anyone who adores minecraft. You are now added to my list of favorite writers!
  One of your best fans,
  Sassy pants!
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Intrigued with seeing some dark and twisted words from Michael Gagain on social media, I decided it was time to really see the real man behind Twisted Rhyme from an Altered Mind! This 5 STAR read is most definitely twisted!! With my amateur status in poetry, it's very refreshing to read the author's own words, "I may not write in poetic verse, I refuse to use words a reader has to look up in Webster's..."
Each entry contains an element of darkness. Some, in my mind, are beyond twisted; while others have tones of revenge, survival, and humor. By far my favorites include The Whittler...where "I make ladies...ivory dongs." and A Conversation; "...don't call me Mike it's Michael...do I call you Dick or small and thin? or do I call you thick and full of sin..." This collection of poetry will make you stop and think...realizing the varying degrees of the twisted madness that plagues society today. I look forward to acquiring more works by Gagain!
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Whyyyyyy?? Too much craziness Jah and Lani! Man mind blowing decisions and Yay finally realizes her love for Zy is just too much to let go. They both have done some tit for tat so pick up and be grown about it. Jah has a few secrets and when his wife Mariah comes back the games are starting all over again! Now I know the mature one is now out of pocket and who better to let him know that his Earth. Young people have to tunderstand where their loyalty lie. Sha was tooo foul! Rhonda really? They deserved everything they receive. This story has some dangerous nuts in it. Quaseem seems like he is one who really has it together but I cannot put my finger n it but I feel some shade coming on. Rique is still pawning over Yay but respects her decision and love still comes back home. I think Little Sister of Jahs has some really haterade in her for Lani. That truth needs to be told! Jah and Lani continue through their ups and down but the man that will wear the pants is Jah!!! Louie and Harmony are really getting it together but Louie will learn keep the past in the past. I hope it is not too late. Damn fire story and yes you know it as soon as part #3 is available I am there!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Brilliant!  A wicked mad genius!! You just have to read it! Leave all your judgements at the door!!!!!!
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I've never read any books by Tarryn Fisher before, but wow wee!! This one will grab ya by the shoulder and you just get sucked into this wild wonderful amazing world of Tarryn's creation. I was amazed by her style ... so amazed!! I am so curious about so many things written in the books ... like what the heck do Cheetos that are a week old ...what do they taste like? really ... 1st thought?? GROSS but then ... it is kind of like Peeps & how folks like to let those age ... I hate Peeps ... but I've always enjoyed Cheetos on occasion. Not like I need them that often ... but you have me curious?!?! I guess for me ... it was really a comfort ... meaning ...so many points in my life are similar ...I dated a David ...gosh that brought up so many memories. Not sure this happens to all girls or what? But at times you forget yourself and just devote yourself to a guy ... you don't wanna like/love him so much it hurts. Then you see some bitch (sorry not sorry, 'cause some girls are just plain rude) I might like a guy think he is cute, but I would never go after a guy who is already dating another girl ... I mean, what the heck??! so not cool!! Get your own type of issues. Why do folks (men or ladies) they it is okay to do this??! NOT RIGHT!! sad face. I dated a few guys along the days of my life and their were really hateful girls ...so I get it ... WHY? I love everything about Yara, her style, her way of acting with others, she is too perfect!! I truly can not wait to read more from Tarryn ...just curious of where to start! If I find another keeper from her I will be beyond pleased!! I LOVED THIS READ!! thank you. must read. so great. couldn't put it down!! loved love loved loved it!! I was reading "Beautiful Mistake" by Vi Keeland ... and I saw this book as a recommendation to me on Amazon, & I was like okay I will take a jump 'cause Amazon thinks I will like it ... BOY am I so glad I did. ( ;
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This porn & Pimp family are FINISHED, at long last!!
Their 'No-Talent' asses are finally going to diappear!
Please go read the NewYorkPost.com , today 1/13/2012....There is a dynamite article about how EVERYTHING the KarTRASHians's attach thier name to is "Toxic"...that's right--->"Toxic"..The ratings for KUWTK are down, magazine covers w/ them on it sit UNtouched on the racks, their (Joke) of a book didn't sell well at all and is makred 75% off(LOL) and  thier Polyester Krap Klothing @ SEARS was a complete wash-out...Even at 65 off it is NOT moving!!
Kim was replaced by a dog for the Sketcher's ad campaign, and no one want's to pay the K-Klan any money to show up at any events anymore!!

 You all must read the NY Post article today; I Promise you will be delighted to hear that we, the public, will no longer be seeing, hearing or knowing anything about this mindless, greedy, shallow and CORRUPT family anymore!
Oh happy day :-)