Disjointed and hard to follow.
579786
Not his best.  The only saving grace comes at the end when the author admits to very little research and takes no responsibility .  Disappointing.
557276
The story was too confusing and disjointed to follow. It was unclear who the characters were or what the story actually was. I had NO idea that the story was set anywhere around the time of Moses (as the blurb points out), and it just didn't have the coherence that I'd expect from a professionally done novel
2682007
This story was hard to follow.  There were  too many characters and too many that turned out to be insignificant.
2130459
kinda boring and disjointed. Could have been laid out better. they appear to be just articles patched together in a book.
2988430
This movie was a little disjointed. There were many facets being covered and I had difficulty understand.ding how they related. Just didn't make sense. Maybe more buildup of the backstory.
3496045
This was one of the most disjointed collections I have ever seen. I enjoy innovation but the storyline was difficult to follow and everything was minimized to a two dimensional characterization.  I grew up with the original FF and I was honestly disappointed.  It was a difficult read.  Fortunately the price point was low.  I saw a number of fives on this but I just don't see how.
1622083
Good overall storyline but VERY hard to follow. Kept jumping back and forth in time and between characters making it very confusing. Not a fan of the format.
1556396
Too long and disjointed and highly improbable.
2173633
Biggest problem is the organization - I can't say I really understand it, most chapters had some unifying theme like religious use, sexuality, etc, but the way the chapters fit together is very disjointed.  There are huge time jumps back and forth across continents.  I learned a few interesting tidbits, but I couldn't stay interested.  Sometimes it was so dense it seemed that any piece of information acquired was stuffed in no matter how useless it was to the story.  If you super love spices go for it, if you want a nice microhistory this isn't it.  Doesn't read well.
1660799
A little disappointed because it just seemed be more disorganized and hard to follow . I liked the storyline but there were too many characters to keep track of .
2105116
Too disjointed to really follow easily.  The alternating chapters about the travels of the brother and the sister was off-putting for me.  Also I would have liked more narrative on what caused the country to collapse.
1024318
Couldn't even finish it.  Confusing trying to keep up with the characters' relationships, when things happened, etc.
1336671
The storyline is interesting but the disjointed writing made it hard to read.  I will not be looking for more of this story which is a shame as the plot is good enough. Sorry but I do not recomend.
3672259
Disjointed story which made no sense to me. Trying to force a story where there was none.
  Sorry, it simply was not good.
100598
The author tried too hard to be colorful and descriptive, but ended up with an overuse and abuse of metaphors that render the story almost impossible to follow.

The story is rather disjointed, and it is almost torturous to read with the story line jumping around to different scenarios and characters, and the plot is not particularly original, with no twists to make this book worth the effort it took to read it.

Not recommended
2411246
Coordination of pictures and text left a lot to be desired. In my opinion hard to follow although it was helpful overall.
660118
While the stories in this book were interesting, the disjointed way the information was presented made them difficult to follow. Plus there were numerous error/typos. The book could benefit from a good editing and switch of format.