The book would have been so much better without all the foul language
586491
The book would have been so much better without all the foul language.  I don't mind a word here and there but it was ridiculous.
2887404
I should have known it would have too much bad language.  I just got rid of the book, and only read a tiny bit into the second chapter, but by then I had tolerated more offensive language than I would normally begin to tolerate in a whole book.  Yikes, is all I can say.  I don't care if the types of characters in any book would speak such language in real life; I am looking for an intriguing story, and in my world, I don't use that language, nor does anyone around me.  The story line is not worth that intrusive dialogue.  Reading about crude people is not attractive, either.
773596
I'm not a prude by any means. But the author chooses to use foul language over a and over again. In my opinion it blocked me from connecting with the characters. Other than that a standard read.
617121
An entertaining read, but could have made the same impact without all of the strong language.
1943402
Way too much use of the f word. Movie would have been much better without it!!
330403
The story line is really good but the foul language is what brings the rating down for me,if that was improved it would be 41\2.
1390136
I enjoyed the storyline but kept getting distracted by the gratuitous use of foul language. I have two teenage kids that I've been introducing to science fiction and I think they would have liked this series but there's no way I will let them read this trashy language. This should have a rating for R or equivalent.
After reading this episode, I am not planning on reading any others from this author.
4736241
I would have enjoyed the story much more if it wasn't laced with profanity, & hadn't used God's name in vain, over and over.
37465
I am offended by the frequent use of the name of the Lord Jesus in profanity.  It was entirely unnecessary and eclipses the rest of the books, like a sore thumb.  Ms. Hill could have used a plentiful deluge of F and S words and still made her male characters appear macho, and even included more explicit sex and violence; and not offend a large group of potential readers near as much.
3734094
The mystery was fine.  I did not appreciate all of the cussing and foul language that took place at times.
4943093
I think the author could have accomplished the same feelings and emotions he was trying to convey without the foul language. An author should have more vocabulary choices than distasteful or inappropriate words such as the ones he used.
2287361
Interesting premise to a story and I liked the characters, but I found the excessive use of offensive language a huge disappointment.
2768186
the info would be taken more seriously if it wasn't written so poorly!
3517720
The foul language was so atrocious I finally just read the last chapter to know how the story ended. The f bomb was used so frequently it was a distraction to the story. Huge disappointment from such a talented author.
4669938
It would have been much more effective it the author had stuck to the facts, and left out all the nastiness.
4131800
Not a movie for Christians, too much foul language.
2678690
I was very disappointed from the beginning of the book due to all the swear words that were used. I love to read, but not with all the smutty language.