Good Story But Needs An Editor
585521
Interesting story and character development.  Unfortunately, this series of books is in dire need of judicious editing.  There are multiple typos, grammatical errors and misspellings on almost every page.  If the author would like to contact me through Amazon, I'd be happy to help her out.
T. Baxter
4479061
Overall, I enjoyed the book. It has a good story line. However, more attention needs to be placed on the editing. There were plenty of simple mistakes that shouldn't have been there. One being two different spellings of the main character's nickname.
1549148
What an interesting story with intriguing characters.  It's obvious that Mr. Suastegui is a gifted storyteller.  It is also obvious that this book desperately needs the help of a good editor.  Some of the grammatical errors are so egregious that my 8th grade students wouldn't make them.  (A woman waiving her hand, hair color due to a bad die job, apostrophes on most of the plurals)  If you can read past the stuff that makes you want to call the grammar police and just enjoy the story this book would be an easy 5.
1569479
The story was good and kept my attention but the editing needed some work. The book had multiple grammatical and spelling errors. Overall a good read. I would read more of her books.
1759621
A good story that needed a good editor. The characters were not fully realized, and some segments were overblown; others, pointless.

I wanted this to be better, and with more editing advice, it could have been.
3567141
Needs editing - whole paragraphs repeated and some other issues as well.  Good story.
3323851
Good story would've been a four star if there hadn't been so many spelling or grammatical errors. "Careful" was spelled carful every time. Obviously has no use of commas or where to put quotation marks. Wish I could get over the editing issues, and I tried throughout the entire book, but there were just so many.
36519
I liked that this story has MCs whose ages are over 35 and that it deals with the vagaries of dating, but the story could have been much better. It really needs an editor! Misplaced punctuation, incomplete sentences, incorrect grammar, and just poor writing plague the reader throughout the story, including stupid homonym mistakes such as using perimeter where parameter should have been used. It could have been a contender...
3325640
This book would have 4 stars from me but it needs an editor very badly. Beyond the spelling and grammar there is repetition throughout of ideas.

All that being said this is a great read with story and character elements that are a lot of fun.  It has humor and action, with a drop of philosophy built in.

Thanks Mr. Mancour, let's find you an editor.
319049
I enjoyed the story but wish the book had been written better.  It was like it was not edited correctly.
3234121
I agree with some of the other reviews written that this story has good potential but still needs some work.  It is a good story line and comes together pretty well in the end.  However, as has been mentioned, the errors and abrupt transitions makes it very difficult to read especially at the beginning.  I was very tempted to not finish it but it is hard for me to leave a book unfinished.  In addition to many grammatical errors, there is often no indication of a scene change within a chapter.  It leaves you feeling like you missed something and there was a section early on where I think a portion actually was missing.
2959298
The storyline is interesting but I am being pulled out of the story by several editing misses. If you get pulled out of a story by errors, such as, he instead of she, his instead of he, letters left out like the 'r' left out of shirt, and the like, this story might be hard for you to read. With more editing I think this would be a great story, so for that reason I give it 3 stars.
3695911
Free Fall was a strange tile for this story. This author really needs to hire an editor with better skills. The poor editing takes away from the story, In this Callahan story Chris gets his chance to get the girl he's being pining over for the nearly four years. The mystery and adventure part of the story is well-done. If you can get pass the errors the story is worth the read.
2125289
Interesting and engaging story that kept me wanting to read but a good editor is needed.  I was pleased to see the quality of words in the book but the basic grammar mistakes makes me wonder who edited it. Overall it was a good read and I will probably read book 3.
3940447
This story is a fun, name-dropping jet-setting little  romance with some witty moments, but it's in desperate need of professional editing. Spelling and punctuation errors along with misuse of some words could be easily fixed by a sharp editor's eye and earn this book a higher rating.
4035592
Good story but it definitely needs a better editor so many mistakes and that's saying something if I can spot them.  Also it doesn't leave you wanting for more after the ends. I read the summary of the next book and it seems to be the same story but with the daughter I hour in wrong but it sure read that way.
17421
I enjoyed this story, liked the characters and kept reading in spite of the very poor editing, and almost total lack of world building.  I'm not a very analytical reader, so I can't pinpoint what kept me reading, but there's definitely something there.  It's a pity that the mistakes in word usage and grammar kept throwing me out of the story.