I kind of liked it. It just felt like it was missing ...
592139
Interesting story.  I kind of liked it.  It just felt like it was missing something in the construction of the story.
1743343
It was good, but it felt like it picked up in the middle of the story.  Since it has been awhile since the last book, I felt a little lost in the beginning.  The best part was at teh end when she learned more about her family and their history.
2186840
The writting was fine, the story line interesting, but there just seemed to be something missing. Not enough grit or feeling perhaps. But still a good story, well done.
1645259
I got this book because it was recommended and everybody was like OMG it's such a great book. It was a good book and it had some entertaining moments but..... I felt like it could have had more to it. Maybe it was the end and how Justice's secret came out. But it wasn't like an OMG moment. Through out the book when it would mention he needed to tell Ally the truth you expected it to be like a devastating secret. I mean it was interesting and I enjoyed it but it just lacked something. I think I just went in with the attitude of this was going to be a knock your socks off type of book and it just wasn't for me.
2369224
Feels like it is missing a few additional closing chapters (even as a novella) - kinda ties into Book 3, but needs a secondary adventure.
616145
Something was missing. I liked the storyline. I like the idea but something just wasn't right.
1601628
This felt a bit more like the outline for a story then a full story by itself. It just needs more something to feel like a completed story.
1397551
This book left me feeling incomplete.  Although it is part of a series, it does not stand well on its own.
3138884
What about part 2?  I feel like something is missing.
It held my attention. Looking for next one. A a
4475971
First let me say I liked the book but it honestly wasn't my favorite. To me it felt like something was missing. I never really connected to the characters in this book like I did in the previous 2 books. It was still a really good book though. Looking forward to the next in the series.
2459281
I don't mean I think the copy I downloaded is glitched and I am missing pages. I mean I feel like some of the story is missing. Everything moves too fast, so a lot of things are glossed over. Also, it doesn't really feel like it fits together. I'm sure there are reasons for (SPOILER ALERT) radical Muslims and drug runners to work together, but the reasons given in the book don't really make sense. (It pretty much comes down to "they are working together because they just ARE!")

I wanted to like this book, and there were a lot of good things. But not enough to really raise the rating.
3659744
Likable enough characters and it was an enjoyable read, but at times I just felt as if it was missing something, or like the story just became somewhat affected. I can't figure it out. I didn't really like the ending either, which tends to just ruin books for me, but I would still recommend it.
2992476
It is a good concept, but I wish there was more to it. It felt unfinished needing more substance, plus better photography would really add weight (no pun intended) to this book.
2253271
After finishing it I feel like I miss the characters and want to see how they are doing.
3977017
The cinemetography was great, acting was good, but the story just felt like it was missing something. Kind of just plodded along with no real purpose.
3498115
I would say I loved it up until the end. I feel like it was cut very short and abruptly.
1008062
I don't know what it was with this book that felt somewhat incomplete. Dont get me wrong, I loved it and all. It was sexy, fun, had its questionable parts and those brothers? Y-U-M. I enjoyed it, yeah, but I cant give it the last star simply because I felt that the book missed something. Lets say, one of the brothers, the development of him was lacking for a story thats supposed to be about two brothers sharing one girl. (Sure at one point I thought if there was a threesome here or something, Im sure I wasn't the only one that hoped for it. But sadly there isnt.)

I get that the story was based over one brother to get the girl but I felt that it neglected the point.

I think what Im trying to say is that I expected more from this story cause the blurb made me expect something else, but that wasn't the case. And thats saying a lot seeing that Ive been in love with Victorias writing since I stumble into her wattpad page one night a few years ago.

Honestly? The book is great, but like I said I felt that it was missing something and that disappointed me a bit. Still will read whatever comes out next. But my personal thought? Is that this particular book couldve been better.