Slow starting for me, but I ended up captured.
586922
It took me a bit to get into this, almost 40%. I think this is due, to the fact that during this time frame Brandon was constantly having negative thoughts about who he is. Because of his religious upbringing and how his parents reacted to him coming out. It hurt my heart for him so many times how he would have negative thoughts and doubt. But, after he and Abel finally got in tune to each other, I was captured. Abandon are definitely sweet together. Abel is fun and tries so hard to be positive. The fan fiction and fandom parts of the story were entertaining. And the ending was absolutely adorable. It made by heart giddy.
2972510
It was a bit slow getting started, but the ending was great.
3202140
Initially in the beginning I was not too enthralled with the story, but as I kept reading, I got caught up in the storyline.  The ending was rather a surprise to me!
814326
Started off really slow and almost lost me, it wasn't until about half way through that I started getting into it and ended up actually liking it.
4320513
It was very slow to start, but stick it out. It was drawn out and annoying for a while, then about chapter 10, everything changed. It was worth the read. Glad I didn't give up.
1247316
Took me a little while in the beginning to follow it and get interested.
2949979
It took awhile to get into it, found the beginning very slow.  However there came a point I could not put it down, and was somewhat shocked in the end..
3174796
This story started off a little slow but once it got going I couldn't stop. I know this could and has happened so that helped me get really into it.
190361
slow at the beginning , but it gets better . The timeline is confusing at first.
3782826
It took me longer than normal to really get into the book, but once you were finally able to get to know the characters, it did become a page turner.
3273018
It took me awhile to get in to it with the different narrators, but once I did I was hooked!
2233334
The story started slow, but once into the book I found it hard to put the book down.
2889873
I had trouble getting into the premise of the book but in the end I found it enjoyable to read.
1264989
I thought it a little slow in the beginning, However by the 3rd chapter i was beginning to find myself on a lovely journey, and not long after that I could't put the book down.
2130951
started slow, but I'm glad I stuck with it.  Got much better on the second half
3312232
I thought the book was slow to start but once I got about 1/3 of the way in I was hooked.
3441834
I found myself dizzy from the different characters and their associations; until I persevered and got farther into the book I found my attention waning.  Once the action started and I began to finally understand the connections, I enjoyed the book.  Some might not have persevered.