Great short story! Requires a box of tissues
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I originally reviewed this story as part of the Code 10 Book collection, my current review is based upon that version of the story, I purchased this "clean" version today and can't wait to read the changes.

I got the opportunity to read the new version of this story tonight and I have to say I liked it just as well as the original. Detective Jolett may have come across as just a smidge less snarky without the colorful language but it certainly didn't take anything away from the story, I still started crying at the domestic violence call and was a blubbering mess by the end once again. I hope that we get more adventures with her new partner Bell in the future!

I first was introduced to Suzie a couple of years ago when I read her book about going through the academy and Ive followed her and all of her identities ever since. I loved this story, I laughed because I love her snarky, strong female characters and I cried, at the domestic call, at the visit with Suiis former partners family, in the alley, by then I was crying so hard my husband asked if I was okay, when I laughed and said I was reading a sad story, he told me I should probably stop reading. Ha, never! Thank you Suzie for always touching my heart with your words.
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I usually hate short stories because they feel super rushed and I enjoy losing myself in books. But! This short story was an excellent read. Only thing I wish was different was that it was an actual book. The plot was great and very realistic. The author gave great background to the characters and made me fall in love with the friendship right when it was introduced. I was also surprised I enjoy this as much as I did because I hate to read typical girl loves guys n becomes curious books that always finds themselves in the lesbian section. But this read was different. It wasn't a huge factor that was overly annoying. Though 5 bucks for a short story is kind of steep but I borrowed this with my prime so I guess I can't complain. Hopefully the author considers making this an actual full length book because a fan has been born in me.
4193960
This was a fantastic short story, full of amazingly well written scenes and just enough information to make the story gut-wrenching.

A little paranormal twist thrown in for good measure and you have yourself a pretty awesome little story.

I would certainly recommend this one.
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Received free for review:
Short story, but gripping!
Hope to read more from this author!
4383291
I really enjoyed this short story.  It is very touching despite its very short length. Because it is so short there isn't a lot to the plot, nor is there much character development.  Nevertheless, I found it quite satisfying.  Abby is running away from an unwanted marriage.  She has been betrothed since infancy to a man she has never met, but has heard a lot of negative things about.  Time is running out for the two to get married, and Abby has been unable to convince her parents to break the betrothal contract.  While on the run, Abby hits a spot of trouble at which time, Will, the hero, comes to the rescue.  Within a couple of hours the two are in love and get their HEA.  I really liked Will....a whole lot.  As another reviewer said, Abby was a bit silly.  But considering she was only 18 and had lived a very sheltered life, that was to be expected.  Besides, Abby did realize, to some extent, how silly her behavior was at times and was even able to laugh at herself.  This  story is the perfect length to read while waiting at an appointment or at bedtime.  If you enjoy this genre of books, are looking for a light quick read, and is willing to suspend disbelief you might want to give this little book a try.
4626206
Have your box of tissues ready.  This is a sad story of one young boy who needs a liver transplant and the problems and obstacles both he and his parents face.  When nine year Ethan is diagnosed, his mother Delanie is overwhelmed and is soon also dealing with a distracted husband, a mound of bills, overbearing mother-in-law and more.  She does have a tight knit group of friends whom she can lay her burden on. But as time is dwindling, one wonders if Ethan will survive?  Like I mentioned, this one is a tearjerker and emotional.  As the reader, I can feel her pain and frustrations with doctors and social workers.  I received an ARC from the author and do recommend this book.
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This was a very short, clean novella-sized book. It is possible to read it within an hour, depending on distractions. Be prepared for an emotional ride. One minute I had tears in my eyes and another I was laughing.

Due to the size and limitations of this work, things happened and happened quickly. Some readers do not like minimalistic writing, but then sometimes you don't want to dwell on circumstances too long. When the story went way off canon, it never returned. The OOC [out of character] behavior will drive some readers crazy and the evolution of the story will seem rushed.

We open at Hunsford the day after Darcys disastrous proposal with Darcy hand delivering his letter of explanation to Elizabeth. He then turned and walked toward Rosings, lamenting that he would never see her again.  He was met in the lane by a footman running to fetch him. Something had happened at Rosings. Our story turned on a dime at this point, and I have to say that I really liked the change in Lady Catherine. Although she had a terrible shock, her reasoning was touching and nearly made me cry.

Mr. Bennet and his favorite daughter: I thought about you all the time. I used to pray that youd live to be a hundred years old. I didn't know. I didn't know that you were ashamed of me. Khaled Hosseini

There was a scene between our dear girl and her father that will grip your heart. Views were expressed that we have never heard spoken from Elizabeth. Mr. Bennet was given a set-down from his favorite daughter that he never expected to hear in his lifetime. I felt for both of them.

Mrs. Bennet was and will always be Mrs. Bennet: Of course mothers and daughters with strong personalities might see the world from very different points of view. Katherine Howe, The Physick Book of Deliverance Dane

I was glad to see that McMann didn't harp on the least favorite daughter trope to the extent that I wanted to slit my own throat. Elizabeth, although embarrassed by her mothers actions, still loved her. Mrs. Bennet only wanted her daughters, even Elizabeth, to have an advantageous marriage. Although she wasn't sensible in her declarations on their marriage prospects, she still cared for her girls.

I loved the influence Lady Catherine had on Mary, Kitty and Lydia. Leave it to Lady Catherine to wield the appropriate weapon that garnered the cooperation of the girls and brought them in line. Well done. Lady Catherine. [On a personal note: when I was young and courting, my aunt informed me that she knew nearly everyone in town and I needed to behave. There would be a thousand pair of eyes on me and they would report back to her if I misbehaved. Yep, scared me straight]. Lydia and Kitty never knew who was watching their behavior or how Lady Catherine always seemed to know what they were doing.

I wanted a bit more between ODC and found myself a bit disappointed in the romance department. We had to wait until the very last for those magic words. Dang oh, that wasn't the magic word. That was my frustration. This was a free offering through Amazon.
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Wow! A short story that sucks you in from the very beginning. A marvelous story of how twisted society really is. The story has some hard content to read with things like abuse, sexism, and racism. You really begin to feel for the victims and want everything to end happily for Maggie. I would definitely recommend this to anyone who is looking for a short, dramatic read. It makes you feel many emotions in the informal first-person writings of an abuse victim. I was able to finish the book in less than a day and could not be torn away from it. I felt for Maggie even if I have not experienced abuse myself, but Maggie's spirit makes you feel like you can stand up to anything and can really be a part of the drama.
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This book is one of the best stories I have read in a VERY VERY long time! It is a quick read because the story flows so well. I started this morning and just finished a couple of hours ago. It was so moving. Definately have your box of tissues handy...I cried about the last 100pgs.
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The story line was great. Lara - still suffering from the loss of the love of her life- is given he boss Blake as secret santa for their office Chirstmas party. Little does she know the secret santa is rigged.

Will Lara let go of her past to move on to her future? Will Blake get the one thing he truly wants for Christmas?

This is a very short story. It is very well written and keeps you interested until the very last word. I wish there was more Blake and Lara! It ended way to soon!
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Very good ! I really enjoyed reading this short story !!
1419557
A quick read with a beginning that draws one into the story. I don't feel there is enough dialogue/detail/description regarding the buildup, the emotional fear, and the actions of the physical abuse to make this a book from which abused individuals would find or gain strength. Being "saved" by one-more-man, in my opinion, makes this short novel more like a romantic novel.

The unexpected twist was unique and gut-wrenching; providing more depth to the story - and was some of the best writing.
2414186
This is a heart wrenching story of loss and recovery. Even though it's a short story it does not lack in taking you on an emotional roller coaster. I look forward to reading more from this new author!
3653235
This short story is truly amazing.  I don't know how to describe it without spoilers.  All I can say is that this story had a major emotional impact -- more than any other short story I have ever read.

Life can be really hard for those who actually do something instead of just talking about it.
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Alterations by Jane Suen is a short novella that leaves you wanting more. I was hoping for a little bit more when the short story ended. I have questions that need answers!

I rated this short story four stars and thats mainly because I feel like there should have been more to finish up this story. I loved the sci-fi aspect the author used! This story follows three ladies dealing with different problems that turn to a doctor that implants a special chip to help them with their problems.

How far would you go to get what you want? In the end, I think each woman was better off without seeking help. We all need to learn to cope with our problems on our own. I love how that author made that so clear. You problems may not be as bad as you think and your answer might be right in front of you.
1468224
Slipping is a short story about a boy who starts seeing the ghost of his dead sister, and she is warning him about a murder that is going to be committed that he needs to stop.
I don't usually like short stories because there isn't enough character development, BUT I would definitely recommend reading this one! Miles obsesses over whether or not he is crazy. At the same time, he doesn't want to disappoint his sister so he goes along with her wishes.
Kurth does a great job of pulling you in and then she slaps you with a surprise ending. But I'm not going to tell you that, you'll have to go read it yourself. :)
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Sweet, heartbreaking, nostalgic, heartmending. All this and more fill this short story. My eyes stayed damp with just a touch of tears throughout the story. So muchand so extremely well-written, put into a short story. Good character development was there, breathing life into each of them. I smiled at the end, after doubting that it was going that direction. Thank you, Mallory Kane!