Exciting terrible story.
582350
Evan Marshall and Jeremy Logan get into more trouble than anyone would believe possible. Monsters, spirits, unstoppable demon gods, whatever they are, scare the crap out of the reader and cause more heart palpitations than you would believe possible. Very good read!
4800615
Except for an exciting ending, this is not up to RWW's high quality story telling. First 3/4 of book really drags.
4182725
How bad was this book?  Considering all the misspellings, wrong homonyms, and illogical punctuation the story itself was ridiculous.  If you removed all the gratuitous sex in this book it would only take about half an hour to read and the story still wouldn't make any sense.

Save yourself the time and trouble. Nobody gets out alive and all plans fail.
4552713
The story is there but it reads like a third grade level book. I couldn't wait to get finished. 1 star only.
360737
Terrible terrible , Don't  waste your time.
1658507
It was terrible.  Do not buy this book.  The writing and the story were terrible.
4427631
I found the story and the characters to be very trite.  I couldn't be bothered reading much beyond the second set of lovely breasts.  Characterization of the women involved trite sexual generalizations (both slender, both had well shaped breasts, blah blah blah. Little lesbian action recalled from when one character was young that did nothing to enrich character development or the plot). The men were saved from the sexual details but were no more interesting.  It had all the thrill and challenge of a third rate bodice ripper.

I donated the book to the local library.

The only reason there is a single star is that Amazon would not allow me to leave the stars blank.
339440
The story line is somewhat lost because of all the f bombs. Not suitable for younger readers. The plot is garbled and seems rushed. Don't care to read anymore from this author. There is plenty of action, the foul language was in almost every sentence though and this made it impossible to connect with the characters or the plot.
2878121
Wow.  I like adult novels, but this was way too graphic.  Stupid story line to even really keep my interest.
2943354
Not a nice story but instead a book of bad behavior and terrible decisions. I think it was a good thing it didn't cost much cos it was BORING.
1863058
Dissapointing from such an exciting story teller.. Factually correct but certainly not a page turning experience. I could not finish it.
11443
Story would have been wonderful if it were written better. I gave it 2 stars for that reason alone. Really could have been a 1 star if it wasn't at least intriguing.
3571202
I wish I had downloaded the sample before I purchased this book.  It is so NOT James Patterson!  The story is lame, and the gratuitous mayhem and gore is not even believable.  I struggled through it hoping it would have some redeeming value, but it doesn't.  This book is written at a 5th grade level.  It is not remotely believable.
4660372
I was tempted to give it 1 star, but the story was too good. I gave it 3 stars because occasionally this story was very engaging. Sections of the story were kept me turning pages wondering what would happen next and I really enjoyed it. Other times the story was so bad I skipped entire portions of the series without losing any context (book 3). Which really was a let down when I was turning pages and then hit a dead spot (more than 1).
The author often just throws something into the story out of no where, without regard to the past story events, or in direct conflict to his own fantasy world, to simply move the plot forward because he couldn't think of anything.

Also be prepared for incredible racism, and sexism that the author thinks to be hilarious. A better title would have been "Swords. Sorcery. Bigotry"
2631677
Grossly caricatured "evil villain"; nonsensical storyline,disjointed between sea and land creatures, good and evil. I thought the author was taking me forward into a complex but fascinating narrative which for a time seemed to get exciting, but which dropped off precipitously at the climax. Very disappointed in the dragged-out story with a finale which seemed little more than a clich.
1234952
There is so much wrong with this story.

1) Do not mix present tense with past tense. You will drive your readers crazy doing this. You drove me crazy with the constant tense switching. Present tense doesn't work with 99% of fiction stories. Also 1st person isn't that good. Some people like it, but I don't.

2) The dialogue is drab and robotic. Also word choice is very poor.

3) The characters must be from the planet Krypton, because Sarah is getting bashed in the head by twenty, yes I said twenty, zombies all at the same time and they all have crude weapons and oddly she is not only still alive, but she is still conscious enough to be choked out by one of them. Also, to continue with the extremely super-heroic characters, they are digging... yes digging from one city to another city. Tunnels.. they are digging tunnels. There are only four people digging in shifts and they are going from one city to the next, underground, with shovels in... take a seat and brace yourself... they go from one city to another in a day or less. Yes digging... with shovels in one day or less. Are they extremely small cities? Is the world so compact that four people can dig through hard clay and rock between two cities in hours or a day? Or maybe like I said earlier? The main characters are all from the planet Krypton. In that case, why don't the characters just fly from one city to the next.

4) More problems with realism. They are scavenging for food, cans of food from one city to the next. They find an old man who, for no reason, just gives them 100 cans of food. Where did they carry all these cans of food? As they are digging a super long tunnel very quickly from one city to the next, how do they move all these supplies down the tunnel as they dig?

5) The biggest problem of them all. The writer skips through all the fight scenes, all the opportunities to be gory and action-packed and simply says "They fought the zombies." Oh yes and Aria has her "incredibly accurate" marksmanship and is equally incredible with a knife as she takes down literally hundreds of zombies in a single paragraph. But, this writer spends pages and pages describing a water fight with exquisite detail. Writer, why can we not have this much detail when you describe the fight? What if you told us how Aria's knife sliced into the zombie's cheek, severing its black goo covered tongue. This is a zombie apocalypse story, not a damn pillow fight.

Writer, I recommend you unpublish this "story" and change your name and try again by writing a real story. I am certain that the other review here (the five star review) was either paid for or given by your dearest friend in the world who cheated me into wasting an hour of my life reading this drivel.
2872632
This book overly dramatizes a situation that was already dramatic on its own. It uses obscene language just for the purpose of being obscene. The editing is terrible. I found mistake after mistake, even on the back cover of the book. Frank Snepp's "Decent Interval" and David Butler's "The Fall of Saigon" are both far superior to this almost fictional account. This book reminds me of a modern action movie. It is written for twelve-year olds who want to see lots of special effects, but no substance.