Fig 5 - drawing parallels between systems of different levels of complexity (from prokaryotes up to civilizations) is interesting, but it is a bit distracting at this point.
The English is a problem too: "soft molecules" is not a typical way of describing organic molecules, and "formation and deformation" of molecules would be better expressed as formation and degradation. Statements such as in line 232: "the first step is to limit the characteristics of life-like systems into life on Earth" leave one scratching ones head.