1) Further explanations of “Biophilia” are added in the Introduction. Revision in Page 1 Line 27-29: “The term "Biophilia" is evolved from human evolution research and is coined to describe humans' inherent love affinity for the living things in the natural world [1,2]. It explained why we prefer nature because it is an instinct deeply rooted in the human brain.” 2) Literatures are added in the revised version to combine “workplace design” and “Biophilic Design”. Revision in Page 2 Line 48-53: “Workplace is one of the typologies that attracts the attentions of researchers. Scholars who research the relationship between the built environment and health found that the environment not merely directly or indirectly affects human health but also affects their work and study performance [59]. Studies proofed that biophilic design benefits workers’ health and productivity in an office environment [60, 61, 62, 63].” Citations are added in the Reference list: Derek, C. C., 2003. Environmental Quality and the Productive Workplace. In C. J. Anumba (Ed.), Innovative Developments in Architecture, Engineering and Construction. Rotterdam: Millpress Science Publishers. Lei, Q.H., Yuan, C., Lau, S.S.Y., 2021.
The introduction can be optimized appropriately.The introduction of the term "Biophilia" can be more detailed and easy to understand .By contrast, the introduction of “Biophilic Design”is very substantial.It may be better to find some literature to combine workplace design and “Biophilic Design”,and then to explore the relationship between them.