The findings were all extremely similar, so it felt quite repetitive to discuss them all. We actually had more detail in an early draft then trimmed it out. However, we have now added some more of this detail as requested (see lines 100 to 112), whilst trying to limit repetition.
Line 96-97- some more detail on the findings of these various surveys would be beneficial similarly to Bowen's study, just so provide a clear background/discussion of literature setting scene for your study.