Changes have been made accordingly. See section with new title: “Transformation pleas and governance approaches for achieving this”. The section now better relates/differentiates evolutionary governance from the other governance approaches mentioned. EGT understands governance as radically evolutionary and is mindful of limitations of any form of governance.
I am referring to universal and generalist statements with a "should be" tone that do not fit well with a scientific article, like the one in lines 51 to 54, among many others in the article.