Thank you for this advice. We have trimmed the paper to focus on two of the five elements of sexual subjectivity - only those that were expected to be most relevant to partnered sexual partner: entitlement to sexual partner pleasure and efficacy in achieving pleasure. This has substantially limited the analyses conducted. We provide a rationale for this (see the first paragraph on p.4) and have thoroughly revised the entire paper.
**We also expanded the first paragraph of the Limitations to say: Although this study provided insight into how aspects of sexual subjectivity differed over one year in young men and women and uncovered associations of age and sexual behavior with sexual subjectivity, there were two limitations worthy of note.