Changes have been made accordingly. See section with new title: “Transformation pleas and governance approaches for achieving this”. The section now better relates/differentiates evolutionary governance from the other governance approaches mentioned. EGT understands governance as radically evolutionary and is mindful of limitations of any form of governance.
The section 02 "Transformation pleas and approach to achieve this" can be improved. I recommend reviewing the title referring to the governance debate that is addressed in the section, for example: "Transformative pleas and approaches of governance to achieve this"...It is also important to better relate/ differentiate the evolutionary governance proposed by authors and the others discussed in the literature (adaptive, reflexive, deliberative, collaborative, etc.). The authors cite several debates/definitions/approaches, but do not position themselves in relation to them, making clear what their theoretical contribution. I suggest that the authors present the debate and the different definitions and then present the notion of GE, relating it to the TSEI.”