Thanks for your kind words. The quality of the paper has improved on the reviewer's advice. There are many things that need to be improved in this paper, however we will remember your sincere advices and write more advanced papers later. Thanks again.
I think the paper, and especially the abstract, are much improved. Both in terms of readability and accessibility, but also in terms of context and framing. I think the paper has the ability to make a contribution to the literature in a way that the previous version may not have been able to.