We revised the Figure 1. The connections between 24 Biophilic Design Attributes (Column A) and 14 Patterns of Biophilic Design (Column B); The nine biophilic design attributes for the workplace (Column C). First, to simplify the image, we put all the definitions into a new table in the appendix (Appendix A. Definitions of biophilic design attributes and patterns). In case that there are some readers are not familiar with the biophilic design attributes or patterns: Revision in Page 4 Line 164: “These two biophilic frameworks are chosen as research references (definitions of the at-tributes and patterns are in Appendix A).” Appendix A in Page 22: “Appendix A. Definitions of biophilic design attributes and patterns” Second, we fill the correlated boxes with same solid colours to make them more recognizable: Revision in Page 6 Line 207: Point 11:
Please consider simplifying the figure. Figure 1: The image presenting all the linkages is very interesting and is worth emphasising, but contains an overwhelming degree of information, and the text and line sizes are too small for readership. For example, some text boxes many not need further explanation (e.g. presence of water); also the lines connecting column A to the same patterns in column 4 could be colour coordinated.