However, Korea has prevented a rapid collapse of the medical system by slowing the rate of propagation around it, and the role of smart city services has been significant in this regard.
I think the paper, and especially the abstract, are much improved. Both in terms of readability and accessibility, but also in terms of context and framing. I think the paper has the ability to make a contribution to the literature in a way that the previous version may not have been able to.