Our build-up of argumentation has been improved.
2) The section 02 ""Transformation pleas and approach to achieve this"" can be improved." I recommend reviewing the title referring to the governance debate that is addressed in the section, for example: "Transformative pleas and approaches of governance to achieve this"...It is also important to better relate/ differentiate the evolutionary governance proposed by authors and the others discussed in the literature (adaptive, reflexive, deliberative, collaborative, etc.). The authors cite several debates/definitions/approaches, but do not position themselves in relation to them, making clear what their theoretical contribution. I suggest that the authors present the debate and the different definitions and then present the notion of GE, relating it to the TSEI.”