Remaining Comments Although the new section 3.1 helps situating the cases within their respective national contexts, it’s focus is on performance indicators.
Content-wise to me the key observation is the - potentially systematic - connection between the way cluster policies arestructure and the organization of cluster initiatives. This is not a big suprise, and it doesn't really answer the question asto which model is better (only that there are internally consistent models that are different). But it is still a usual observation to make.