The investigation explains that combined literature review and POE results are one of the practical methodologies to establish biophilic design frameworks for specific workplace typology. And the questionnaire can be applied in future biophilic design research for investigation. The applications of the results are highlighted in Section 1.4. Objectives and in Section 5 Conclusion: In Section 1.4. Objectives, the three practical applications of the results are mentioned: first, a POE questionnaire for assessing the biophilic design for workplace accounting for health and wellbeing. Second, the study will provide a new biophilic design guidelines for workplaces, which can effectively assist researchers and designers to improve office biophilic design practices and decision-making on design attributes selection. The Conclusion is rewritten to highlight the contribution and implementation of the results: Revision in Page 23 Line 516-540: “The significant research outputs from the present scrutiny are shown as following: a) The authors develop a POE questionnaire for evaluating the biophilic design for workplace health and wellbeing. … “c) Furthermore, the questionnaire results enhance our knowledge on the practical ap-plication of biophilic design frameworks for the workplace and contributed to more framework design consideration.” … “e) The study results contribute to provide designers with evidence-based design at-tributes for workplace design (i.e., the nine selected workplace biophilic design attributes).” Point 9: It is better to supplement the temperature, humidity, and other parameters of the selected office in the part of the experiment, so as to facilitate readers' reference rather than just giving the location.
The theoretical part of the presentation is extensive, but the application part is relatively poorly described.