2) Literatures are added in the revised version to combine “workplace design” and “Biophilic Design”. Revision in Page 2 Line 48-53: “Workplace is one of the typologies that attracts the attentions of researchers. Scholars who research the relationship between the built environment and health found that the environment not merely directly or indirectly affects human health but also affects their work and study performance [59]. Studies proofed that biophilic design benefits workers’ health and productivity in an office environment [60, 61, 62, 63].” Citations are added in the Reference list:
The introduction can be optimized appropriately.The introduction of the term "Biophilia" can be more detailed and easy to understand .By contrast, the introduction of “Biophilic Design”is very substantial.It may be better to find some literature to combine workplace design and “Biophilic Design”,and then to explore the relationship between them.