We have addressed your comments and responded in the attached file.
3.60 One of the challenges in this is we don’t know background rates of change for dogs with SRB. That is, would the same % of dogs changed (in either direction) regardless of changes in owner schedules? We might see some dogs become sensitized over time and develop SRB (or something else changes in their life to precipitate it), while others might habituate or their behavior undergo extinction. As such, we can’t say for certain that these changes are due to changes in owner schedule. You note that the pseudo-R2 was small but I think you could go into more details and note the possibility that it was unrelated too. However, your results that the greater the change → the greater the new risk of SRB does lend support to the idea that this change in management might be a factor. I would suggest highlighting and discussing this outcome more.