C) Page 2, lines 87-88: “In this regard it is widely demonstrated that almost half of surgical patients who developed VTE have a mild thrombophilic syndrome [18].” This is rather an astonishing statement, and as your source, you cite a paper from the “Australian Family Physician”.
The Discussion section could benefit from a language revision, especially in the latter part, to make the flow better. Also, a brief discussion on the limitations of your study should be included.