1) Further explanations of “Biophilia” are added in the Introduction. Revision in Page 1 Line 27-29: “The term "Biophilia" is evolved from human evolution research and is coined to describe humans' inherent love affinity for the living things in the natural world [1,2]. It explained why we prefer nature because it is an instinct deeply rooted in the human brain.”
The introduction can be optimized appropriately.The introduction of the term "Biophilia" can be more detailed and easy to understand .By contrast, the introduction of “Biophilic Design”is very substantial.It may be better to find some literature to combine workplace design and “Biophilic Design”,and then to explore the relationship between them.