It is important that the authors give more emphasis on the scientific evidences of what they defend and anchor their argumentation in such evidences, whether theoretical or empirical.
2) The section 02 ""Transformation pleas and approach to achieve this"" can be improved." I recommend reviewing the title referring to the governance debate that is addressed in the section, for example: "Transformative pleas and approaches of governance to achieve this"...It is also important to better relate/ differentiate the evolutionary governance proposed by authors and the others discussed in the literature (adaptive, reflexive, deliberative, collaborative, etc.). The authors cite several debates/definitions/approaches, but do not position themselves in relation to them, making clear what their theoretical contribution. I suggest that the authors present the debate and the different definitions and then present the notion of GE, relating it to the TSEI.”