We have added all the new references suggested by Referee 2 on page 3 of the new manuscript. These includethe ones mentioned in our reply to Referee 1’s point 4 above, and all also the references: Corney98,Mekhov09,leroux10,Mekhov12,Niedenzu13,Lee14.
Nevertheless the presentaion sheds new light onto the underlying microscopic dynamics and connects the dynamics to proven optomechanical models of cavity BEC dynamics.