Observation Results-Biophilic Design Attributes in the Selected Offices is moved to be Section 2.3.2. It is because the 2.3.1 is the selection of office, and the Section 2.3.2 provides observation details of the selected offices. After re-construction, Section 3. Questionnaire Results focus on illustrating the questionnaire results. Hence, all the means (SD) are replaced as medians (IQR). And the corresponding figures (Figure 1 in Page 13 Line 359-361 and Figure 4 in Page 16-17 of the original manuscript) are removed in the revised version. Thanks for your suggestion. The figures and pictures have been adjusted in the revised manuscript. The Section 3 Questionnaire Results and Section 4 are rewritten in the revised version: a) the statistical analysis is modified; b) to reduce elaboration in the text. Please kindly refer the following revisions: 1) The original Section 3.1. 2) In the revised version, the formulars in Section 3.3 2. Quantitative Results of Impacts of Biophilic Design for Workplace are removed due to the statistical analysis is modified: The means (SD) are only applied when the assumption of normality applies for the datasets.
Some of the results in the illustrations are obvious and can be reduced to less elaboration. Overall work of the article is sufficient, the results is has the certain significance, but its limitation is obvious to all.