· Line 138: insert “the” before “TDCS” also inserting “even at relativistic energies” would strengthen this intent of this work · Line 139: reference 30 should be replaced with a theoretical reference or the text changed to not imply that ref 30 is a theoretical work · Line 140: delete “one” and insert “the” before “non” plus change “that this would enhance” to “this enhances” Also lines 141-143 are probably meant to be a single sentence.
Also, round the numbers in Fig 6 to whole keV units.